Fire and Ice
Cold words burn7 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Ginda,
This short poem tells a huge truth that we often forget, that words said in coldness and anger hurt the most.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Happy Holidays.
Joan
P S I would like to let you know that I just published a book title "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com and there is a like to it at the bottom of my profile page.
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Hi Ginda,
This short poem tells a huge truth that we often forget, that words said in coldness and anger hurt the most.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Happy Holidays.
Joan
P S I would like to let you know that I just published a book title "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com and there is a like to it at the bottom of my profile page.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-4-2, Fire and Ice, has the proper formatting and crosses the intensities of the emotions revealed as the chickens come home to roost in the fiery henhouse.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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This 2-4-2, Fire and Ice, has the proper formatting and crosses the intensities of the emotions revealed as the chickens come home to roost in the fiery henhouse.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Bill.
Comment from Samantha Wymer
This is 2-4-2 poem is very straightforward in the meaning of the entire poem and very truthful words in a cold world we live in. I hope you win first place in the contest. Can't wait to see what you right again.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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This is 2-4-2 poem is very straightforward in the meaning of the entire poem and very truthful words in a cold world we live in. I hope you win first place in the contest. Can't wait to see what you right again.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Samantha, for your sweet words of encouragement.
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You're welcome
Comment from Carol Clark2
This is a great 2-4-2 poem for the contest. The picture is perfect, as well as your title. Your words are so true; judgement does hurt sometimes, especially if it's delivered coldly. Best wishes in the contest. Carol
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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This is a great 2-4-2 poem for the contest. The picture is perfect, as well as your title. Your words are so true; judgement does hurt sometimes, especially if it's delivered coldly. Best wishes in the contest. Carol
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Carol.
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My pleasure.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This 2-4-2 contest entry describes how strong judgmental words can be, even to the point of searing one's feelings. Striking photo in presentation here. Good luck in that contest!
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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This 2-4-2 contest entry describes how strong judgmental words can be, even to the point of searing one's feelings. Striking photo in presentation here. Good luck in that contest!
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Crystie.
Comment from June Sargent
We often don't realize how our words can affect others - until it's too late. Cold, heartless remarks can destroy lives. Think about the consequences before opening that mouth. Great entry for the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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We often don't realize how our words can affect others - until it's too late. Cold, heartless remarks can destroy lives. Think about the consequences before opening that mouth. Great entry for the contest.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Thank you, June.
Comment from zanya
An interesting juxtaposition of ideas here in this 2/4/2 for the contest portraying the impact of our words and particularly 'words of judgement'-a good pic to illustrate
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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An interesting juxtaposition of ideas here in this 2/4/2 for the contest portraying the impact of our words and particularly 'words of judgement'-a good pic to illustrate
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thanks, Zanya.