Butterfly Family
A syllable count plan14 total reviews
Comment from evilynne
Butterflies are beautiful and graceful. As you note, they are a pleasure to watch and bring a certain serenity to our lives. The picture is beautiful, as are your words. Evi
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
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Butterflies are beautiful and graceful. As you note, they are a pleasure to watch and bring a certain serenity to our lives. The picture is beautiful, as are your words. Evi
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
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Thank you for stopping by reading my work and leaving a nice review.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Patricia.
This free vers poem shows how mousy you like butterflies.
The y bring beauty and peace to the world.
Keep writing and stay healthy l.
Enjoy the rest of your week.
Joan
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Hi Patricia.
This free vers poem shows how mousy you like butterflies.
The y bring beauty and peace to the world.
Keep writing and stay healthy l.
Enjoy the rest of your week.
Joan
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thank you for a very nice review. I appreciate it very much.
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Thank you for a very nice review. I appreciate it very much.
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Don't mention it, Patricia.
Joan
Comment from Carol Clark2
Such a clever system for your syllable counts! Your poem is lovely, and the picture is beautiful. A nice presentation all together. I like the use of gossamer wings. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Such a clever system for your syllable counts! Your poem is lovely, and the picture is beautiful. A nice presentation all together. I like the use of gossamer wings. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thanks so much for the kind review. It is very much
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You're welcome. Have a blessed night.
Comment from jim vecchio
You are so good at what I call "mathematical poetry". And, on a trying day, you gifted us with more beautiful butterflies. They brought peace to my soul as well.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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You are so good at what I call "mathematical poetry". And, on a trying day, you gifted us with more beautiful butterflies. They brought peace to my soul as well.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Your reviews are always appreciated. Thank you so much
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Patricia,
A nice unique way of calibrating a poem. Is this for the contest?
Beautiful photo and very lovely poem.
I have several shirts with butterfly bouquets ironed on them. One summer I went all out in butterfly motif.
Splendid poem, Patricia,
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Patricia,
A nice unique way of calibrating a poem. Is this for the contest?
Beautiful photo and very lovely poem.
I have several shirts with butterfly bouquets ironed on them. One summer I went all out in butterfly motif.
Splendid poem, Patricia,
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much for your very kind review. I appreciate it. It is not a contest for him.
Comment from Begin Again
Butterflies are so special and I feel my heart and all the warmth when I see them. You do such a beautiful job with the poems. Hope you are feeling better.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Butterflies are so special and I feel my heart and all the warmth when I see them. You do such a beautiful job with the poems. Hope you are feeling better.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thank you for stopping by reading my work and leaving such a nice comment. I appreciate
Comment from barbara.wilkey
We had a monarch on our rose bush a couple of days ago, but right now only the yellow butterflies are in our yard. Of course, they're really pretty too. I had fun reading your poem. Thank you.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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We had a monarch on our rose bush a couple of days ago, but right now only the yellow butterflies are in our yard. Of course, they're really pretty too. I had fun reading your poem. Thank you.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thank you for reading my work and leaving such a nice review
Comment from Lisa Carter1
Mama Pat this is so interesting and I learned so much every time I read your poetry. Of course I love the three beautiful butterflies with the cotton candy background. Thank you for sharing your story about your husband and three daughters as well. Beautiful butterfly family.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Mama Pat this is so interesting and I learned so much every time I read your poetry. Of course I love the three beautiful butterflies with the cotton candy background. Thank you for sharing your story about your husband and three daughters as well. Beautiful butterfly family.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much for stopping by reading my work leaving such a nice comment. I appreciate it.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Hi Patricia,
What a lovely poem. I love butterflies they are so beautiful. We have boring monarchs and yellow ones here in my part of Texas. When I lived in Tennessee I saw blue ones that were absolutely gorgeous. It is a shame their life is so short.
Did you make up that poem style? It works wonderfully
Great job.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Hi Patricia,
What a lovely poem. I love butterflies they are so beautiful. We have boring monarchs and yellow ones here in my part of Texas. When I lived in Tennessee I saw blue ones that were absolutely gorgeous. It is a shame their life is so short.
Did you make up that poem style? It works wonderfully
Great job.
Cecilia
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind review. I did not make up the format. The format is called a CADEA.
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You're welcome. I am struggling with my next poem. Hopefully, I will get it posted today.
Cecilia
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A joyous poem as butterflies are your favourite insect just now. I enjoyed your positivity here.
You have an extra word in this line Patricia
(comfort as (they) they're flying in)
Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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A joyous poem as butterflies are your favourite insect just now. I enjoyed your positivity here.
You have an extra word in this line Patricia
(comfort as (they) they're flying in)
Love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. I appreciate it. I made the change that needed to be made and I did a little extra as well so you might wanna go back and read
