2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
Aaah, now this one makes the reader catch their breath, Gypsy -- love the endless compared to the infinite!! ;) Wonderful verbal imagery, my lady -- thanx for sharing that smile and fresh air! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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Aaah, now this one makes the reader catch their breath, Gypsy -- love the endless compared to the infinite!! ;) Wonderful verbal imagery, my lady -- thanx for sharing that smile and fresh air! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
An excellent metaphor revealing that beauty is more than, merely, superficial and is found in the ageless quality of nature and the soul. Thank you for sharing your divine verse, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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An excellent metaphor revealing that beauty is more than, merely, superficial and is found in the ageless quality of nature and the soul. Thank you for sharing your divine verse, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie.
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Wouldn't it be wonderful if we took lessons from the clouds and sea and didn't worry about aging. I saw a sign the other day, it said, "I'd rather be the oldest person at the gym, than the youngest person in a nursing home." I've adopted that logic. I enjoyed reading your poem and the presentation.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Wouldn't it be wonderful if we took lessons from the clouds and sea and didn't worry about aging. I saw a sign the other day, it said, "I'd rather be the oldest person at the gym, than the youngest person in a nursing home." I've adopted that logic. I enjoyed reading your poem and the presentation.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
These are spectacular pictures! I think you're right that nature like the sea and clouds don't worry about aging. But somehow the mountains here in the US look younger than the mountains in Asia...
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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These are spectacular pictures! I think you're right that nature like the sea and clouds don't worry about aging. But somehow the mountains here in the US look younger than the mountains in Asia...
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much 😊 big sister.
Love ❤️
Marival ❤️
Comment from Patrick Bernardy
Hi Gypsy!
This is a very lovely poem, and it accompanies a stunning visual as well. The combination of "endless" with the middle line about "not aging" sets the mood of beautiful infinity. Nicely done! I may have some Haiku coming down the pipe soon enough, by the way!
Patrick
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Hi Gypsy!
This is a very lovely poem, and it accompanies a stunning visual as well. The combination of "endless" with the middle line about "not aging" sets the mood of beautiful infinity. Nicely done! I may have some Haiku coming down the pipe soon enough, by the way!
Patrick
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much 😊 Patrick
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Comment from Rachelle Allen
So very true, Gypsy!! We should all take a cue from this, shouldn't we? True beauty never gives such thing a thought, and neither should we. I love this, and - I'm sorry to be so repetitive - the artwork and presentation are spectacular with it. xoxox
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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So very true, Gypsy!! We should all take a cue from this, shouldn't we? True beauty never gives such thing a thought, and neither should we. I love this, and - I'm sorry to be so repetitive - the artwork and presentation are spectacular with it. xoxox
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
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