Halloween Fright
Boy doesn't follow the plan.4 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A fun offering here in an enjoyable mixed meter and rhyme! :) Love those last four lines! ;) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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A fun offering here in an enjoyable mixed meter and rhyme! :) Love those last four lines! ;) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Thanks for the read and feedback.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A sweet family Halloween story here Harry and I enjoyed the sentiments and humour for this Hallows Eve and wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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A sweet family Halloween story here Harry and I enjoyed the sentiments and humour for this Hallows Eve and wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Thank you for the read and feedback. x
Comment from RodG
Halloween can be scary for any child trick or treating alone. I like how you set the scene in your opening lines. I can imagine how that whisper could terrify the boy. What is especially delightful is that it's a FATHER who goes treating with his son. So often it is the mother. Rod
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Halloween can be scary for any child trick or treating alone. I like how you set the scene in your opening lines. I can imagine how that whisper could terrify the boy. What is especially delightful is that it's a FATHER who goes treating with his son. So often it is the mother. Rod
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Halloween Fright, tells a quick story that sets us in the street with dad and son making the rounds of the candy-giving neighborhood. This tale would be perfected with the addition of a closing quotation mark after junior's last utterance. Fun times for kids and nice parents.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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This poem, Halloween Fright, tells a quick story that sets us in the street with dad and son making the rounds of the candy-giving neighborhood. This tale would be perfected with the addition of a closing quotation mark after junior's last utterance. Fun times for kids and nice parents.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the suggestion. I will edit. Appreciated.