Threads of Inspiration
What thoughts begin...3 total reviews
Comment from SimianSavant
Very nice, except that there's a grammatical error: your noun is "strand" (singular) and your verb is "clothe" (plural). You may think that the noun is THREADS in the first line, but that section is a fragment, therefore the entire line functions as an adjective, and the reader will intuit it that way. So I would either write CLOTHES, or something like THE STRANDS.
I was going to dock a star for this but noticed you had even more going on with your metaphor, which makes this a solid piece overall even with the grammar. Thanks for the read,
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Very nice, except that there's a grammatical error: your noun is "strand" (singular) and your verb is "clothe" (plural). You may think that the noun is THREADS in the first line, but that section is a fragment, therefore the entire line functions as an adjective, and the reader will intuit it that way. So I would either write CLOTHES, or something like THE STRANDS.
I was going to dock a star for this but noticed you had even more going on with your metaphor, which makes this a solid piece overall even with the grammar. Thanks for the read,
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Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from RodG
I like how you have defined inspiration here. Indeed, inspiration is threads of thoughts woven together into something cohesive--a poem or a story. An excellent picture chosen to illustrate your message. Rod
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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I like how you have defined inspiration here. Indeed, inspiration is threads of thoughts woven together into something cohesive--a poem or a story. An excellent picture chosen to illustrate your message. Rod
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thank you. I truly appreciate that you took the time to read and comment on my poem.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love these inspiring and unusual words as you describe our though process when we write something different. You woven words are cleve and unusual, much enjoyed Faye, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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I love these inspiring and unusual words as you describe our though process when we write something different. You woven words are cleve and unusual, much enjoyed Faye, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Dolly. As always I appreciate your reviews.
