The Monarch of London
Big Ben a Joy to the eyes an ears2 total reviews
Comment from Julie Helms
Hi Dawn, I really like your poem on the legendary Big Ben. Thinking of it in terms of royalty ruling from its stationary location is really unique.
My only question would be with the formatting. That last stanza seems like it should be spilt into 3 lines:
Admiring the Sublime Craftsmanship and Design
Big Ben stands the test of time
brings both Joy for the eyes and ears
That may not be your intention, but it was how my mind had to sort it to make sense of it.
I'd also get rid of all that blank space at the bottom.
I loved your concept and hope to see more!
Julie
:-)
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Hi Dawn, I really like your poem on the legendary Big Ben. Thinking of it in terms of royalty ruling from its stationary location is really unique.
My only question would be with the formatting. That last stanza seems like it should be spilt into 3 lines:
Admiring the Sublime Craftsmanship and Design
Big Ben stands the test of time
brings both Joy for the eyes and ears
That may not be your intention, but it was how my mind had to sort it to make sense of it.
I'd also get rid of all that blank space at the bottom.
I loved your concept and hope to see more!
Julie
:-)
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thanks Julie I agree I trying to get use to the app for the writing
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
London would not be London without Big Ben and we rely on it every year when we bring in the New Year as the bells sound loudly. I once saw a program about the man who looked after the bell, it was fascinating and I enjoyed your tribute to this monumental clock Dawn, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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London would not be London without Big Ben and we rely on it every year when we bring in the New Year as the bells sound loudly. I once saw a program about the man who looked after the bell, it was fascinating and I enjoyed your tribute to this monumental clock Dawn, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Thank you Dolly , your review means alot
