Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi
I would think the constant moving shown in this free verse poem would be hard on the family. You can't really make friends or feel comfortable.
It sounds like if people kept quiet there would be less moving and then you would have a long lived in home.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Enjoy the day.
Joan
P S Just to let you know, I have just published a book titled "The Interlopers and other stories in prose and poetry. I have provide a link to it on Amazon.com at the end of my profile bio.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024

Thanks for the comment and concern, luckily my family has found a home that we have been living in for over 5 years.

reply by dragonpoet on 07-Nov-2024

You're very welcome on both counts. Glad to hear it.
Joan

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Exceptional

I just the cadence of this poem that brings hope and a certain resilience that makes you to work towards a better tomorrow. Thank you so much for sharing.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024

Thanks for the feedback, do you have a favorite line?

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

House hunting is both exciting and stressful as the decisions are important and sometimes plans fall through. I enjoyed your inventive and lively poem, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024

Thanks for the comment.