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Many More Birthdays, Jake

For Jake Cosmos Aller

39 total reviews 
Comment from NanaGaye
Exceptional
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Your poem is such a tribute to Jake I'm sure he will just love it What a life he has had and what a poem you have written I enjoyed your touch of humor All the best Nanagaye

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
    Hi Gaye, I thank you my sweet friend for your kind words for Jake and his poem. I know he will appreciate reading your message too. Thanks so very much for the loveliest six stars. You are an angel!!!!
    Love, Debi
reply by NanaGaye on 06-Nov-2024
    Your right My real name is Gabriel the good nuns at school thought that was a lovely name and Mum only called be that when she was cross with me.
Comment from Dr. Nad
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Well here it is Saturday night and I haven't spent any time with Van story. I know shame on me. I probably should be kicked out. Lol I just stopped by to see if I could see a few of the very very best and this is one of them. Thanks for Sharing, sister!

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
    Hey dear brother, I never have talked to you since your birthday and find out how that worked going to help others on your birthday i was very proud of you. I hope you had some fun after all. I thought for sure I would hear from you when you got home. As you can see I have been really busy too.
    Thanks for your awesome reviews and six stars dear bro. So appreciated. Love, Debi
reply by Dr. Nad on 18-Nov-2024
    I fell when I was in Valdosta working with Samaritans purse and messed up my leg for about two weeks, I could hardly walk even with a walker. When I had my x-ray the doctor said somethings going on in there I need an MRI.
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Debi,
That nurse was very hard headed and should have been reprimanded for falsifying documents. I wonder what date they pick if someone is born exactly at midnight. Wow it must be a very stressful life you almost die so many times. It is wonderful to hear about whirlwind love stories that last.
I wish him a belated Happy Birthday. My husbands birthday is also on the 30th.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful weekend
Joan

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
    Hi Joan, boy your husband was awfully close to being a little Halloween babe. Hey were you guys without electric power from that snow? I never heard of that many without power from heavy snow before, but we were without for almost 24 hours. It was 58 degrees F by morning. I had a birthday poem to do but thank God I had two iPads and an iPhone and used my cellular power from my iPhone fro internet, so glad I keep them at all times.

    I thank you so much for this lovely review for Jake, and all the kind words you always put into your reviews, dear friend. I had so many in the last week, so I really got behind. Thanks so much for understanding. Love, Debi
reply by dragonpoet on 07-Nov-2024
    Hi Debi,
    No we never lost electricity. We only got a little more than a dusting of snow.
    It was melted by mid morning the next day.
    You're welcome for the review.
    Joan
Comment from ESOSTINE
Exceptional
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The flow of this amazing tribute to Jakes on his birthday is very lyrical and could pass for a song. The humour embedded in the poem makes it more outstanding. Well done, dear Debi. I wish Jake a lovely birthday celebration with many more celebrations in the coming years.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
    Hi Esostine, another late response and once again, I apologize for that.
    So I do thank you for this wonderful review and such kind words for this poem for Jake. You are the best, my friend. Love, Debi
    And thanks a bunch for this lovely six stars.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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I am not so sure about his music choices, but your poem is great as it covers many of the interesting things that Jake has done in his 69 years. He has lived an interesting life in his many times of cheating death.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
    Hi Sweeite, I love the heart you put into your reviews so much. Thanks so much for all the kind words that you say for Jake and his poem. Love, Debi
Comment from LJbutterfly
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Jake has led a very interesting life, from traveling around the world, visiting all fifty states, living in South Korea, and being married 41 years. You have done a fantastic job incorporating all these facts and more in a beautiful poetic tribute to Jake. The stories you are able to tell in these birthday poems are fascinating and fun to read. I truly appreciate the work you put into them.

To Jake: I wish you a year of joy, peace and love.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2024

Comment from Teri7
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Debi, This is a very interesting and well written birthday poem for Jake. You used great descriptive words and he has had a very interesting life thus far. Happy Birthday to Jake! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2024

Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Debi.
-You did a good job with this tribute for Jake.
-He has led a very interesting life from not
having the right birth certificate to his travels
around the world, and his ancestry.
-A good comparison to the cat and nine lives.
-A very good closing couplet.
-Happy Birthday, Jake. I enjoyed your birthday poem.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2024

Comment from bob cullen
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For both this one and the previous one you deserve a maximum, sorry. I've been too generous to other poets and have none left. Your poems never disappoint. But gee they make me envious.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2024

Comment from Pearl Edwards
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My husband came back to us a few times, but thankfully not 24 instances, that would be very scary for both Jake and his wife. I love the artwork you've chosen for this birthday greeting for Jake. I hope he enjoyed his day, whichever one he celebrates on.
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2024