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Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, the sensual Spanish... and you have captured their innuendos and leading 'allusions of nature' in a very captivating way here, my lady! suppose those years of haiku have made a wonderful agreement of sensuality within your free verse lines... love it! ;) Thanx for sharing this one! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Oh, the sensual Spanish... and you have captured their innuendos and leading 'allusions of nature' in a very captivating way here, my lady! suppose those years of haiku have made a wonderful agreement of sensuality within your free verse lines... love it! ;) Thanx for sharing this one! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much, Yvette 😊
yes, we Spaniards are passionate people.
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy....the sexuality of this poem climaxes in pure reading enjoyement for the reading party--err, tis a good poemage to physical loveage!
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....the sexuality of this poem climaxes in pure reading enjoyement for the reading party--err, tis a good poemage to physical loveage!
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
I love that phrase, drink deep from my river of yearning, and if one was to ask that very question of what is poetry that would be one of the answers I'd give, it's biblically accurate, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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I love that phrase, drink deep from my river of yearning, and if one was to ask that very question of what is poetry that would be one of the answers I'd give, it's biblically accurate, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
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Most welcome
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Welcome
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was like a well sung invitation. The descriptive passages were rich and very warm. Beautiful and romantic. Thank you for sharing. Happy Halloween Gretchen
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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This was like a well sung invitation. The descriptive passages were rich and very warm. Beautiful and romantic. Thank you for sharing. Happy Halloween Gretchen
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much 😊 happy Halloween!
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Very passionate and very sensual, yet very innocent. You're excellent at writing these types of romantic poems. I believe they are your specialty. Thank you for sharing them with us.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Very passionate and very sensual, yet very innocent. You're excellent at writing these types of romantic poems. I believe they are your specialty. Thank you for sharing them with us.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Neonewman
What a beautifully crafted piece, Gypsy. I've never found such love as this. It sounds nice. The creativity that is your mind is extraodinary. Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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What a beautifully crafted piece, Gypsy. I've never found such love as this. It sounds nice. The creativity that is your mind is extraodinary. Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
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My pleasure.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Very sensual and alluring, both the words as well as the artwork. You definitely have the knack, Gypsy, for creating a scene and then evoking all the feelings and sentiments that conjoin with it. Excellent job. xoxox
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Very sensual and alluring, both the words as well as the artwork. You definitely have the knack, Gypsy, for creating a scene and then evoking all the feelings and sentiments that conjoin with it. Excellent job. xoxox
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Jacob1395
You describe this couples love for each other so well in this piece, really making it come to life with your words, which you've constructed so well. I really enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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You describe this couples love for each other so well in this piece, really making it come to life with your words, which you've constructed so well. I really enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
Comment from kahpot
Wow! as you might know I am not well versed in free verse,
"drink deep from my river of yearning" but lines like this help with understanding, to me it is like meaning/feeling replaces rhyme, loved it, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Wow! as you might know I am not well versed in free verse,
"drink deep from my river of yearning" but lines like this help with understanding, to me it is like meaning/feeling replaces rhyme, loved it, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Kym. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Wendy G
That is beautiful and very sensuous, and each stanza seems to present passion, vulnerability and the fragility as well as the power of love, along with the yearning for fulfilment. Lovely work!
Wendy
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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That is beautiful and very sensuous, and each stanza seems to present passion, vulnerability and the fragility as well as the power of love, along with the yearning for fulfilment. Lovely work!
Wendy
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy