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Comment from Mark D. R.
Exceptional
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Gypsy,

I hope your limerick gets rave reviews and the election results will put Clown Cheeto out of our sight as a candidate for the Presidency forever!

Your cartoons are the way I see him too!

Mark

P.S. First limerick for you? If not, this one is most timely.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
    LoL. Yeah, it's my first limerick.
    A few more days and we all can relax.... well, we'll probably get more "the election was stolen " crap.

    Thank you very much for the exceptional six stars review.

    Gypsy

    I got some reviews but most fanstorians are Trump supporters.
reply by Mark D. R. on 31-Oct-2024
    My guess is the same as yours - likely more Trump supporters among FS community. Hopefully, they will vote for Harris in the voting booth.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
    I hope so, a lot of Republicans are supporting harris. Keep our fingers crossed and pray if you belive in that... positive thoughts work too.

    Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
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Well your limerick brings out its theme well, and has an even flow. The political crunch of our country will be ongoing as we try to navigate the rapids created by both parties. I continue to pray for our leaders and people.
RJ

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
    I voted for Harris and she is the right candidate. Trump is a disgraced human being...there's no comparison.

    Thank you very much 😊

    Gypsy
reply by RJ Heritage on 30-Oct-2024
    With all due respect to you Gypsy, you gave that tight, so do the people who do not vote for her, and also those who choose not to vote at all. I will continue to speak to the fact that either way, it brings us closer to the fulfillment of God's word.
    I have listened to so much debate for and against each candidate. I am so gappy that I have the rare 'privilege' to have seen deeper into both than most. Things and people, are not always what they seem to be.
    RJ
Comment from lyenochka
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You wrote a limerick! I remember during his time in office one of my professors called him the "Cheeto in Chief". I guess the title has stuck. Praying that he won't be elected again.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
    Oh... I like cheeto in chief better.

    I know! I wrote in rhyme, I'm as surprised as you are. I think limericks are easier than other rhymed forms.

    Thank you, big sister.

    ❤️ Marival
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Well I think that sums him up all pretty accurately! And. after those hilarious images, I don't think I'm going to be able to view him in any other way, as, hopefully, his would-be voters also wont. Thank you for sharing your entertaining limerick. I like the rhyming too! Debbie

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
    I know! I can't believe I wrote a rhymed poem. LoL

    Thank you very much 😊

    Gypsy
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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That was really good, my friend. I'm not American, but I really have to agree with you. I think the whole world will be tuned in on your election day. I wonder who will be named the winner. He or she will be the most powerful leader in the world. Worrying, isn't it? Well done, excellent limerick. :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
    I'm sure it's going to be Kamala Harris, our first woman president! She is well qualified and I'm certain she will put the people first.

    Where are you from? I'm from Spain but moved to the USA at 16 years old and I'm a proud American citizen.

    Thank you very much 😊 Sandra. How are you doing? I hope you are well.

    Gypsy
reply by Sandra Stoner-Mitchell on 30-Oct-2024
    I'm English, living in England. I did live in Spain for 11 years, but missed my grandchildren and came home. I remember some Spanish, but will be having to get back into it now, because my granddaughter has a Spanish boyfriend. Chloe is an accountant here in the Southampton branch of accountants, and her manfriend is an accountant working in the Spanish branch. He comes over sometimes to work in her branch for a while; that's how they met. He's such a nice man. I am now helping Chloe with her Spanish and together we'll both benefit. It's a refresher course for me and I'm loving it.

    I'm keeping my fingers crossed for you. The President of America is a powerful person who the whole world looks to. xxx
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Sandra... I'm like you, I would miss my children and grandchildren too much.

    Gypsy
Comment from Mike Stevens
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Another fine poem, Gypsy, and you're so right, he uses a stroller. He's so immature. And, he uses adult Huggies to keep the bullshit from erupting from that orifice. He needs on for his mouth!

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
    Ew... I won't be able to get that image out of my mind... lol

    Thank you very much 😊

    Gypsy
Comment from royowen
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I don't think I've seen such a poor choice of leaders in my time as an observer of elections, I'm glad I'm not there, and I don't have to make choice, if anything needed God's intervention it's this election, well done Gypsy, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much 😊

    Gypsy
reply by royowen on 30-Oct-2024
    Welcome