Miranda Chronicles: Teacher's Pet
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Agents Elgin and Page"Miranda finds herself in another situation.
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Comment from Sanku
Two feds in the other car? I think I must have missed something? I don't remember those two characters--Howard Elgin and nathan page?
Miranda has some inner conflicts about her actions....
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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Two feds in the other car? I think I must have missed something? I don't remember those two characters--Howard Elgin and nathan page?
Miranda has some inner conflicts about her actions....
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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In Miranda's previous book, Aaron found two cars submerged in a pond. Thank you for this. Gretchen
Comment from lyenochka
Hooray for Aaron getting some research done! And I hope Miranda talking to her ex-mother-in-law was a good thing. Hopefully, she would know how to investigate discreetly. I like your soul-searching conversation between Miranda and Mirror-Miranda. That Mirror self is rather tough!
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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Hooray for Aaron getting some research done! And I hope Miranda talking to her ex-mother-in-law was a good thing. Hopefully, she would know how to investigate discreetly. I like your soul-searching conversation between Miranda and Mirror-Miranda. That Mirror self is rather tough!
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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Mirror Miranda let's it fly, that's for sure. Lol. Thank you for this. Gretchen
Comment from Ric Myworld
In life, we can only protect those who are willing to be protected, and lucky for Waylon, the one person he fully trusts is someone who truly cares about him. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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In life, we can only protect those who are willing to be protected, and lucky for Waylon, the one person he fully trusts is someone who truly cares about him. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much. Gretchen
Comment from Jim Wile
This was such a good chapter, Gretchen. Although I didn't fully follow the two agents part because I hadn't read your previous novel, I got the gist of it, and I thought it was interesting the way you made a parallel between Miranda and Nathan Page at the end.
That was a terrific conversation you had with your "toughest critic." What a unique way to show Miranda's thoughts. She has a difficult choice to make, as there were compelling arguments on both sides. It will be interesting to see what she decides to do.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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This was such a good chapter, Gretchen. Although I didn't fully follow the two agents part because I hadn't read your previous novel, I got the gist of it, and I thought it was interesting the way you made a parallel between Miranda and Nathan Page at the end.
That was a terrific conversation you had with your "toughest critic." What a unique way to show Miranda's thoughts. She has a difficult choice to make, as there were compelling arguments on both sides. It will be interesting to see what she decides to do.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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Thanks so much. Mirror Miranda is always making her re-evaluate her choices. Gretchen
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Ohhh, this is classic Miranda!! A tough critic, but a fair and honest one, too. And smart as hell. This is why all your readers absolutely love this woman. She's the equivalent of each of us, but she does it way better!
Fantastic chapter, Gretchen!!
xoxoxo
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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Ohhh, this is classic Miranda!! A tough critic, but a fair and honest one, too. And smart as hell. This is why all your readers absolutely love this woman. She's the equivalent of each of us, but she does it way better!
Fantastic chapter, Gretchen!!
xoxoxo
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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Thank you for this. I've noticed how i don't pussy foot around things as much since I've been writing her character. She's been good for me. Gretchen
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She gave you time to percolate, but she was always in there. (I bet SHE'S not a Delayed Gratification person...) ...you know, not that I'm bitter still, four days later...
xoxoxo
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Kind of confusing Who are those people, and what is Aaron researching? Happy Halloween. Do you get many trick or treaters? Enjoy the rest pf the week. Karen
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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Kind of confusing Who are those people, and what is Aaron researching? Happy Halloween. Do you get many trick or treaters? Enjoy the rest pf the week. Karen
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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These characters are from the original book. Thank you. Gretchen
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okie dokie. My computer crashed and destroyed all my writing and my pictures. The writing is in fan story but, the pictures are lost.I have a lot of work to do. I am bummed. Karen
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Miranda starts to question herself here, her actions and thoughts as her prime consideration is not to lose Waylon altogether. Another fine chapter Gretchen in this emotional an tug of war story to win custody of Waylon, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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Miranda starts to question herself here, her actions and thoughts as her prime consideration is not to lose Waylon altogether. Another fine chapter Gretchen in this emotional an tug of war story to win custody of Waylon, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Dolly. Miranda will need to make a lot of concessions before it's all over. Gretchen
Comment from Samantha Wymer
This entire read from chapter to chapter is captivating from the characters, dialogue, and the plot of your storyline. You're well-crafted when it comes to words. Great story.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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This entire read from chapter to chapter is captivating from the characters, dialogue, and the plot of your storyline. You're well-crafted when it comes to words. Great story.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Gretchen
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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Sadly, she did get that info about Waylon's teacher from Dougie. And yet, if it was accurate, she might have saved a number of boys from a miserable fate.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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Sadly, she did get that info about Waylon's teacher from Dougie. And yet, if it was accurate, she might have saved a number of boys from a miserable fate.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much, Carol. I'm glad you see the problem with her source. Gretchen
Comment from Wendy G
Excellent. I like the link-up with Miranda's previous book. I also like the way you present Miranda's thoughts as a dialogue. That's what we do in real life as we weigh up the pros and cons of any situation. Well done!
Wendy
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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Excellent. I like the link-up with Miranda's previous book. I also like the way you present Miranda's thoughts as a dialogue. That's what we do in real life as we weigh up the pros and cons of any situation. Well done!
Wendy
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Wendy. Your review means the world to me. Glad you came back for more. Gretchen