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Comment from Jasmine Girl
Haha. The fake polices were good ideas. It looks fun and I wonder why not some of us to have a real one. Then we live all over the world. Some may not want to travel at their age. I will have to write one, too.
Well done.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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Haha. The fake polices were good ideas. It looks fun and I wonder why not some of us to have a real one. Then we live all over the world. Some may not want to travel at their age. I will have to write one, too.
Well done.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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have fun writing your version, and thanks for reading mine!
Comment from Wendy G
A fine post! Well done! It was very imaginative and creatively written, and full of fun, as were all the other additional chapters.The book itself was wonderful and reading all these extra chapters was just super.
Wendy
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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A fine post! Well done! It was very imaginative and creatively written, and full of fun, as were all the other additional chapters.The book itself was wonderful and reading all these extra chapters was just super.
Wendy
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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it IS a fun project Rachelle and Gretchen have going, and it's really interesting reading people's different versions of the cocktail party and an imaginary get together. Thanks for reading and commenting on mine!
Katharine
Katharine
Comment from marilyn quillen
great story, very very well written, you certainly have a knack for storytelling. are you all going to do one for Halloween since it just passed? I'll bet you guys could really rock the crap out of it
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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great story, very very well written, you certainly have a knack for storytelling. are you all going to do one for Halloween since it just passed? I'll bet you guys could really rock the crap out of it
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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not me, but it was fun making this stuff up and reading other people's versions, which I haven't caught up with yet.
Thanks for your neat comments!
Katharine
Comment from lyenochka
How fun that you had Judi gather inspiration for her scripts based on this wild Fanstory convention! Glad you joined in Katharine. Wouldn't it be great to actually meet in person in this lifetime?
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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How fun that you had Judi gather inspiration for her scripts based on this wild Fanstory convention! Glad you joined in Katharine. Wouldn't it be great to actually meet in person in this lifetime?
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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yes, it would, but my traveling days are over, I'm afraid. Flying to my sister's funeral, this past March, with flight delays, twice, and the stress of the funeral just about did me in. Unless everybody would like to meet in San Antonio! :)
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San Antonio would be great but not in the hot summer!
Congratulations on the win!
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thank you,Helen!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, my goodness!! It's totally out of control here... sorry I missed the fun, but it sure was hilarious to read about! ;) ;) Thanx so much for sharing (the bedlam?) with us! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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Oh, my goodness!! It's totally out of control here... sorry I missed the fun, but it sure was hilarious to read about! ;) ;) Thanx so much for sharing (the bedlam?) with us! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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I don't think it's too late to add your version, though I haven't checked. I'm sure it would be a "corker!" :)
Thanks for reading mine! It was fun to write.
Katharine
Comment from Lea Tonin1
This was a fun reading and a fun submission. Descriptive busy party! I can almost see Rachelle's face!
She would kick butt I'm sure. That was a great description with the fake police... i almost wanted to kick jane's ass too!
Lots of fun to read, great visuals and excellent word choices. Fun ideas. Thank you for this.Have a great night!
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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This was a fun reading and a fun submission. Descriptive busy party! I can almost see Rachelle's face!
She would kick butt I'm sure. That was a great description with the fake police... i almost wanted to kick jane's ass too!
Lots of fun to read, great visuals and excellent word choices. Fun ideas. Thank you for this.Have a great night!
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thanks, Lea. It was fun to write for it. Crazy crazy goings on at that party!
I really appreciate your lovely comments and they deserve a 6 for making me feel so good! but I'm out, sorry to say.
Many thanks again, Katharine
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No worries, i'm just glad that you're glad!
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Comment from jmdg1954
Katherine,
I was fully engrossed by your take on the story.
Your concept of the story and the charectors intertwined was superb.
I'm sure Rachelle and Gretchen would approve!!
Ciao,
John
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Katherine,
I was fully engrossed by your take on the story.
Your concept of the story and the charectors intertwined was superb.
I'm sure Rachelle and Gretchen would approve!!
Ciao,
John
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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thanks so much, John! I really appreciate that.
I was pleased that Gretchen said she liked my portrayal of her which make me feel good.
Katharine
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is great fun Katharine and I thoroughly enjoyed your inventive story as you pick up the threads of this story and run with it. You made me laugh and I was thoroughly entertained and I am so glad you enjoyed the party and wrote your version for this amazing project, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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This is great fun Katharine and I thoroughly enjoyed your inventive story as you pick up the threads of this story and run with it. You made me laugh and I was thoroughly entertained and I am so glad you enjoyed the party and wrote your version for this amazing project, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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it IS an amazing project and a fun one.
Thank you for your wonderful review. There are some really crazy ones out there. I've got lots of catching up to do in reading them.
Thanks again, Katharine
Comment from Rachelle Allen
The girl with the Southern drawl saves the day for Jim!! I LOVE IT!! And 70-something Jane can still be bought into being a good girl by her daddy!! Meanwhile, through all the goings-on, Judi manages to write a play about it!! (Now THAT's concentration!!!)
What a very fun romp! Creative and outrageous and utterly delightful!
Thank you very much, Katharine, for this fabulous, generous contribution! xoxoxox
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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The girl with the Southern drawl saves the day for Jim!! I LOVE IT!! And 70-something Jane can still be bought into being a good girl by her daddy!! Meanwhile, through all the goings-on, Judi manages to write a play about it!! (Now THAT's concentration!!!)
What a very fun romp! Creative and outrageous and utterly delightful!
Thank you very much, Katharine, for this fabulous, generous contribution! xoxoxox
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Rachelle, you are a wonder, busy busy and yet, take the time to answer us entrants in your lovely way. Thank you!
I knew Judy wrote and acted in plays and thought she could be gathering info, unbothered, if I stuck her under the food table and she could write an award winning play about that crazy night. She told me she liked the idea. As to Jane, maybe her daddy reneged on the Jag. I keep forgetting she's 70, she's such a spoiled brat.
Anyway, many thanks again for your thoughtfulness!
Katharine
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Katharine,
I enjoyed your version of the event. It sounds like it was a rollicking party. While I think it would be delightful to enjoy the company of so many of the talented artists on this site, I think it would be a real stretch for it to happen. If it required formal dress, I know I wouldn't attend- too high fashion for me. I was glad to see that there were no politics discussed at the party by anyone. It was refreshing. Thanks for sharing this gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Hello Katharine,
I enjoyed your version of the event. It sounds like it was a rollicking party. While I think it would be delightful to enjoy the company of so many of the talented artists on this site, I think it would be a real stretch for it to happen. If it required formal dress, I know I wouldn't attend- too high fashion for me. I was glad to see that there were no politics discussed at the party by anyone. It was refreshing. Thanks for sharing this gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Thanks for your comments, Tom. A New York High fashion party? No thanks. I'd pass. New York, period is not my idea of a fun place.
But this contest or whatever you call it of Rachelle's was fun to write my version, and to read different people's take on the party, etc.
As to politics,it seems like Kamala is onTV 24/7. How she gets away with her blatant lies is so maddening, I have to turn it off every time she's on. enough of that.
Take care and thanks again!
Katharine