2024 Japanese Poetry
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Comment from lyenochka
It's good that he is careful not to "ruffle her feathers" even though it's his feathers that get wildly fanned out when he wants to show off to his lovely peahen. Great pictures!
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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It's good that he is careful not to "ruffle her feathers" even though it's his feathers that get wildly fanned out when he wants to show off to his lovely peahen. Great pictures!
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much 😊 big sister.
Love ❤️
Marival
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Lovely, colourful, humorous verse which is a pleasure to read. Once again I enjoy the way you personify and playfully recount your story in verse. Take care Debbie
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Lovely, colourful, humorous verse which is a pleasure to read. Once again I enjoy the way you personify and playfully recount your story in verse. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie.
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is a very well written Naani poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very amazing imagery of the peacock. Thank you sharing. Blessings, Teri
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Gypsy, This is a very well written Naani poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very amazing imagery of the peacock. Thank you sharing. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I guess the Peacock is so glamorous it can't ruffle any feathers. I never thought about that but have known people who were so glamorous many things were beneath them. I enjoyed reading and your presentation.
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I guess the Peacock is so glamorous it can't ruffle any feathers. I never thought about that but have known people who were so glamorous many things were beneath them. I enjoyed reading and your presentation.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
Comment from GWHARGIS
Poor peacock, all those gorgeous feathers and she still isn't interested. I love the tongue in cheek way you threw in "ruffle her feathers". This was great. Gretchen
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Poor peacock, all those gorgeous feathers and she still isn't interested. I love the tongue in cheek way you threw in "ruffle her feathers". This was great. Gretchen
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
Beautiful image, and very well phrased words. The peacock is so much life men in this regard, for as a man I can tell you, you try your best never to ruffle your lover's feathers. Incidentally, I do craft with plastic bottles and one of my favorite to make is the Peacock planter. Nicely done.
RJ
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Beautiful image, and very well phrased words. The peacock is so much life men in this regard, for as a man I can tell you, you try your best never to ruffle your lover's feathers. Incidentally, I do craft with plastic bottles and one of my favorite to make is the Peacock planter. Nicely done.
RJ
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ. I would like to see your bottle crafts. I bet is beautiful and it's always good to recycle
Gypsy 😊
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You're welcome
I'd use some in my posts.
Perhaps...
RJ
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What a delightful poem. I love how you show the dance between the peacock and the peahen! Your use of imagery here is excellent. I love the phrase "trying not to ruffle her feathers" - so funny but also a perfect description! It's a beautiful little moment that you share here. Keep up the great work!
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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What a delightful poem. I love how you show the dance between the peacock and the peahen! Your use of imagery here is excellent. I love the phrase "trying not to ruffle her feathers" - so funny but also a perfect description! It's a beautiful little moment that you share here. Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
Comment from royowen
I couldn't help but be amused with the images of the beautifully appointed peacock trying to catch the eye of the rather dowdy looking peahen, a little different from other animal life, beautifully written, blessings Roy
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I couldn't help but be amused with the images of the beautifully appointed peacock trying to catch the eye of the rather dowdy looking peahen, a little different from other animal life, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Yes, in nature the males are the fancy ones. 😆
Thank you very much,
Gypsy
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Well done