Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Excellent

This is a really short chapter. It's a great cliffhanger to end on, but this should have been part of the previous chapter. There's not really anything to critique.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024

Thank you, Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Oh no, I thought I was going to find out in this chapter! This isn't looking good for someone! A short and excellent chapter once again skilfully crafted to keep the reader hooked. Thank you for sharing, Jacob. Take care Debbie

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024

Thank you, Debbie, all will be revealed in the next chapter. I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

I certainly hope it isn't Noah, since he seems their only chance of finding out anything. I guess whatever happen Oliver wasn't behind it because he didn't seem to know anything. Don't keep us in suspense too long.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024

Thank you, Beth, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it. All will be revealed tomorrow.

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

You promised me an answer in a moment, but instead, you've left me standing here screaming, What is it? Who got murdered? And who is going to get the blame?
Chills, my friend. You deserve a six, but of course, I have none to share. Excellent buildup.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024

Thank you, Carol, it'll be revealed in the next chapter tomorrow.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Is it Noah? I have been worried about Noah. Isn't it Noah with some answers or do I have the name wrong. I pray it's not Callum. You have me on pins and needles. I can't wait to read more.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024

Thank you, Barbara, it'll be revealed in the next chapter tomorrow.