Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

I love your humour and quirkiness in these verses, Gypsy. And I'm now imagining Tarzan bringing these unusual but, arguably, romantic gifts to his loved one. Thank you for sharing. Debbie

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024

Thank you very much 😊

Gypsy

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

i was just about to say... lamb's ears... ewww LOL
glad they are flowers!
cool flowery senryu with smooth flowing petals...
love the bottom pic with their hands glowing...

thank you for sharing!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024

Thank you very much 😊

Gypsy

Comment from RJ Heritage

Excellent

This to me, reemphasizes the place or structure of the family according. I see the man as the provider. I know that this has become strange today, but this is what comes to mind as I read your poem.
RJ

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024

Thank you very much 😊

Gypsy

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Plus, He loved her, and was gentle and perceptive despite his lack of language, and he had a great build and chiseled features, and she was a beauty, beautifully written, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024

Yes, I remember watching a Tarzan movie, it's a wonderful love story.

Thank you very much 😊

Gypsy