Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hi Gypsy. Your poem is nicely written in romantic tones. I call this an ooh-la-la poem. Good imagery and sensory appeal. Well done.
Great photo choice. A pleasure to read. Xo. M

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024

hehe
Thank you very much, M.

Gypsy

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I love the idea of "tucking in the corners of my lover's sighs". I'm not sure exactly what it means but the tidiness of tucking in the corners of sighs shows the caring of the narrator.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024

hahaha ... tucking corners with lover's sighs is not literary thing, it's a poetic concept to create a feeling of the kind of night they had, assuming he sighed out of delight during love making. I am sorry I confused you.

Thank you very much, big sister.

love,

marival


Thank you

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Oh that looks delicious and I must get to mine soon! There's so much said in so few words that is best left unspoken by the luxurious bed of dreams:) Thank you. Debbie

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024

Thank you very much 😊

Gypsy

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

i don't like being tucked in LOL

a great romantic senryu with loving imagery and smooth flow
cool pics, too.......

thank you for sharing!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024

Thank you very much 😊

Gypsy

Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

Leave it to you, Gypsy, to even turn bed-making into something delightful. This is warm and sexy and delightful, especially coupled with the gorgeous, sumptuous photo you found to enhance it. Another masterpiece, just like always.
xoxoxo

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024

Thank you very much 😊

Gypsy

reply by Rachelle Allen on 27-Oct-2024

My pleasure!!! xoxox

Comment from Mike Stevens

Excellent

Another fine poem, Gypsy------if I had of written this poem, in my quest for truth I'd have to replace the word sighs with the words hyena laughter! Lol!

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024

Thank you very much 😊

Gypsy

Comment from Jacob1395

Excellent

I loved how you conveyed emotion in such a few short lines. You can really feel the deep love there is between this couple just from your choice of words. An excellent piece, I really enjoyed it.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024

Thank you very much 😊

Gypsy

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I've just started teaching poetry at church to a couple of ladies who are unsure of themselves, but wanted to learn about poetry, I gave them haiku and senryu to tackle, they want to hone how broad poetry is, and to learn what the thrust of poetry is about, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024

Great choice to start with.

Thank you very much 😊

Gypsy

reply by royowen on 27-Oct-2024

I thought so