Oh, You Are Sure, Are You
A nonsensical response to the contest6 total reviews
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Bob I did enjoy your thoughts and excellent poem You covered many bases and I liked your meter and rhyming scheme
I think we can look back but can't change our life path
I am happy with mine great family and friends and good health cant ask fir much more
Good luck in the contest
Cheers Chris
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Hi Bob I did enjoy your thoughts and excellent poem You covered many bases and I liked your meter and rhyming scheme
I think we can look back but can't change our life path
I am happy with mine great family and friends and good health cant ask fir much more
Good luck in the contest
Cheers Chris
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Thank you Chrissy for taking the time to review my nonsense. I really appreciate your kind words.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I hope you enjoyed writing this as much as it was to read
Well done
It seems you had fun
One and done?
Shouldn't be
Good luck
You should read an accompanying piece I released
Unsipidly Undelectable
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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I hope you enjoyed writing this as much as it was to read
Well done
It seems you had fun
One and done?
Shouldn't be
Good luck
You should read an accompanying piece I released
Unsipidly Undelectable
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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I will read it in the next five minutes. Gee I hope you pay well for reviews. My comment will be on-line shortly.
Comment from Barry Penfold
Like your non-sensical approach to the contest. Clever rhyming and you really do cover some common areas that I think most people have some doubt about. In fact, are we ever sure?. Thanks for sharing and all the best in the contest.
Take care and have a wonderful day.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Like your non-sensical approach to the contest. Clever rhyming and you really do cover some common areas that I think most people have some doubt about. In fact, are we ever sure?. Thanks for sharing and all the best in the contest.
Take care and have a wonderful day.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Barry, in answer to your question. I'm still in the dark an' still searching for the light. Though, if I'm honest, there's not much I would want to change. I've been most fortunate. Good life, good wife an' lots of strife.
Comment from royowen
I love this, it questions the very premise that we might be imagining things that we've.experienced, thst in fact, we be lying to ourselves and the person we are addressing, fallacy or fact? Beautifully written sometimes people might be telling us porkie pies, I love this articulate, great write, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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I love this, it questions the very premise that we might be imagining things that we've.experienced, thst in fact, we be lying to ourselves and the person we are addressing, fallacy or fact? Beautifully written sometimes people might be telling us porkie pies, I love this articulate, great write, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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I don't call them porky pies, in my eyes they are mere distortions of fact. In Australia, it's termed bull....
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No, you're talking to an Aussie, porkie pies are like fibs, but they're still a load of bull.
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I know, I too come from the land down under and I sometimes dip into that land of 'what if.'
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I know, I too come from the land down under and I sometimes dip into that land of 'what if.'
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Absolutely,
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What a wonderfully playful poem! I love how you've got this conversational tone throughout the poem. The repeated questioning seems to add a little tension. I'm sitting here considering the weight of decisions! Love the word choices and this was such a unique and enjoyable read. Keep up the fantastic work. It's a delight to read!
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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What a wonderfully playful poem! I love how you've got this conversational tone throughout the poem. The repeated questioning seems to add a little tension. I'm sitting here considering the weight of decisions! Love the word choices and this was such a unique and enjoyable read. Keep up the fantastic work. It's a delight to read!
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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A delight to read. I never got that from either the Nuns or the Brothers. On reading this, I expected to see a Heavenly address, I thought it may have been from my Mum.
Comment from Kahlani
This poem was so entertaining. I like the way you talk to yourself. And the way you abbreviated the words adds humor and fun. Well done and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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This poem was so entertaining. I like the way you talk to yourself. And the way you abbreviated the words adds humor and fun. Well done and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you Kahlani, I got it in just in time. I'm one of those morons who always leave it to the very end,
