2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
Do like the overall presentation for this Haiku (short-long-short syllable format)! Both pieces of artwork were a good choice to complement your poem.
Like how you paired the witch's (crow) tangles with "mane" and your last line.
Mark
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Gypsy,
Do like the overall presentation for this Haiku (short-long-short syllable format)! Both pieces of artwork were a good choice to complement your poem.
Like how you paired the witch's (crow) tangles with "mane" and your last line.
Mark
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL! Okay, gotta love this one... especially when I know exactly what that murder of crows sounded like... hairy does not begin to describe the chaos! ;-) Thanx for sharing, Gypsy! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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LOL! Okay, gotta love this one... especially when I know exactly what that murder of crows sounded like... hairy does not begin to describe the chaos! ;-) Thanx for sharing, Gypsy! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from GWHARGIS
Poor crows! I'll bet if they don't get free they'll wind up in the cauldron. Lol. I liked your Halloween senryu. It had such a clever last line. Happy Halloween! Gretchen
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Poor crows! I'll bet if they don't get free they'll wind up in the cauldron. Lol. I liked your Halloween senryu. It had such a clever last line. Happy Halloween! Gretchen
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Wonderful Halloween senryu! In so few words and amazing visual, you capture the Poesque (well nearly with the crow) horror and humour of this unnerving predicament! Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Wonderful Halloween senryu! In so few words and amazing visual, you capture the Poesque (well nearly with the crow) horror and humour of this unnerving predicament! Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
Well it is indeed a hairy situation in more ways than one. I like your picture and your choice of words that express the predicament really well. I wish I had a six, but have ran out. Very effective post.
RJ
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Well it is indeed a hairy situation in more ways than one. I like your picture and your choice of words that express the predicament really well. I wish I had a six, but have ran out. Very effective post.
RJ
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from shelley kaye
LOL! great senryu and fun pun with the hair!
good imagery and smooth flow throughout...
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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LOL! great senryu and fun pun with the hair!
good imagery and smooth flow throughout...
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
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Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Bill Schott
This senryu, Tangled in the Witch's Hair, has the proper formatting and allows that the times can be tough for birds to be "tressed" out Forevermore..
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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This senryu, Tangled in the Witch's Hair, has the proper formatting and allows that the times can be tough for birds to be "tressed" out Forevermore..
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy