The Empty Chair
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "The Empty Chair - Chap 5"The mysterious disappearance of a childhood friend
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
OMG! How the heck will they find them? I hope her sister knows the secret room. What a horrid thing to do! I'm glad you have written the next part already, I'm off to read it. Wonderful!! :)) Sandra xx
OMG! How the heck will they find them? I hope her sister knows the secret room. What a horrid thing to do! I'm glad you have written the next part already, I'm off to read it. Wonderful!! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
Comment from Wendy G
So she killed Peyton herself! Because he had fallen for Sharice? How did she get him into that little room? Is she really disabled, or can she really walk? So many questions - but I am totally amazed by your imagination! Well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
So she killed Peyton herself! Because he had fallen for Sharice? How did she get him into that little room? Is she really disabled, or can she really walk? So many questions - but I am totally amazed by your imagination! Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Wendy! I'm not sure where in my mind this story was discovered from, but it certainly was a creepy one. Thank you for reading and for enjoying it.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
So, she did kill Payton and now herself. Her sister did escape, didn't she? Has she always been crazy, or has it just taken over her mind as she learned she could walk, and Payton still didn't love her?
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
So, she did kill Payton and now herself. Her sister did escape, didn't she? Has she always been crazy, or has it just taken over her mind as she learned she could walk, and Payton still didn't love her?
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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It's been a gradual occurrence, but she still remained a crafty person, holding a grudge with her sister. Her walking was psychological, and she used it to her advantage.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
This was glouriously bat shit crazy, excuse the language.
I hope we find a letter that explains when and how she got her legs back. If she ever lost them. Wonderful. If I had a six you would have got it. What a great wild and wicked mind you have. Karen
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
This was glouriously bat shit crazy, excuse the language.
I hope we find a letter that explains when and how she got her legs back. If she ever lost them. Wonderful. If I had a six you would have got it. What a great wild and wicked mind you have. Karen
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Coming from you...I will take this review as a virtual six and awesome thoughts. Thank you so much, Karen. I really enjoyed the review and your thoughts.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Wow, Fiona is really crazy! Wait, she can walk? Why has she been using that wheelchair all this time? I wasn't expecting that. There are so many twists in this story to keep your readers guessing. Well done! Carol
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
Wow, Fiona is really crazy! Wait, she can walk? Why has she been using that wheelchair all this time? I wasn't expecting that. There are so many twists in this story to keep your readers guessing. Well done! Carol
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Her walking was psychological and once she learned she could use it to her advantage, she did just that...plotting and scheming while Sharice waited on her and did all the work. Thanks so much for the review. Hope you enjoy the ending.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
Well, well well, this is like a Stephen King novel, where those wonderful twists and turns come in the novel. This is indeed, a step in another direction, this is brilliant Carol, a real classic, beautifully done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
Well, well well, this is like a Stephen King novel, where those wonderful twists and turns come in the novel. This is indeed, a step in another direction, this is brilliant Carol, a real classic, beautifully done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Don't you love all the twists and turns where nothing goes as expected. I hope you enjoy the last chapter and it's surprises too. Thanks so much, Roy. I truly appreciate it.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Jacob1395
I loved how you ended this chapter, Carol, that was on a really chilling note. I could feel the rage emanating from Fiona in her dialogue and in her action and I thought this was really well done. I can't wait to read more.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
I loved how you ended this chapter, Carol, that was on a really chilling note. I could feel the rage emanating from Fiona in her dialogue and in her action and I thought this was really well done. I can't wait to read more.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Fiona was definitely a bit of Edgar Poe and found how she could manipulate everyone with the wheelchair. Except for her love of Peyton and her misconceptions. Hope you enjoy the final chapter.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
omg! You needed to post this tomorrow so I had a 6!! Wow. Very Alfred Hitchcock-like! Love the ending so much. This was my favorite story of yours to date. Great job, Carol.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
omg! You needed to post this tomorrow so I had a 6!! Wow. Very Alfred Hitchcock-like! Love the ending so much. This was my favorite story of yours to date. Great job, Carol.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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Surprise! There will be one more chapter tomorrow to tie things up. Thanks for the generous thought on this chapter though. I appreciate it very much. You really thought it was that good? Most thought it was to creepy.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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There is no such thing as too creepy!!!
Comment from Teri7
Carol, Now this is a spooky chapter you have penned. It reminds me of a movie from a long time ago. I hope there are more chapters to this. Very good descriptive words and great imagery from your words. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
Carol, Now this is a spooky chapter you have penned. It reminds me of a movie from a long time ago. I hope there are more chapters to this. Very good descriptive words and great imagery from your words. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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One more chapter I think...To tie up everything and then it will be time to start a new one with Eleanor again. Thanks so much for enjoying the story.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Fiona killed herself and killed Peyton. I'd already known she'd killed Peyton. It seems all for nothing, because Sharice had a different boyfriend. I'm wondering if Peyton had somebody else too. Fiona had some issues, that's for sure. Thank you for sharing this with us.
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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
Fiona killed herself and killed Peyton. I'd already known she'd killed Peyton. It seems all for nothing, because Sharice had a different boyfriend. I'm wondering if Peyton had somebody else too. Fiona had some issues, that's for sure. Thank you for sharing this with us.
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Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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She was a psycho and believed in her head that they were meant to be together. One more chapter to tie up the ends. Thanks so much for reading this weird one.
Smiles, Carol