2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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6 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
That's cool to know that the tiny village is cradled by the watching moon and stars. In a way, it's like how the Lord watches over us day and night and cares for us.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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That's cool to know that the tiny village is cradled by the watching moon and stars. In a way, it's like how the Lord watches over us day and night and cares for us.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much 😊 big sister. I was thinking about God when I wrote it.
Love,
Marival ❤️
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Like the juxtaposition your phrasing presents in this one, Gypsy -- calming yet thoughtful! ;) Thanx for sharing, my lady, always enjoy your visions! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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Like the juxtaposition your phrasing presents in this one, Gypsy -- calming yet thoughtful! ;) Thanx for sharing, my lady, always enjoy your visions! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 25-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
this was haiku was so calming. . .
the flow was smooth with great imagery
and the black&white is perfect, too
great whole presentation!
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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this was haiku was so calming. . .
the flow was smooth with great imagery
and the black&white is perfect, too
great whole presentation!
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 25-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
😊
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
This is a beautiful scene that is so peaceful it makes me reflect on the beauty of life. We all lie under the celestial bodies of creation, and indeed are part of it.
Well presented poem of beautiful verses and picture.
RJ
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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This is a beautiful scene that is so peaceful it makes me reflect on the beauty of life. We all lie under the celestial bodies of creation, and indeed are part of it.
Well presented poem of beautiful verses and picture.
RJ
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was very peaceful and heartwarming. I loved the visual of the village being cradled by the moon and stars. It made the night sky seem like a maternal being. Rocking the earth in it's all encompassing arms. Beautifully written. Gretchen
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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This was very peaceful and heartwarming. I loved the visual of the village being cradled by the moon and stars. It made the night sky seem like a maternal being. Rocking the earth in it's all encompassing arms. Beautifully written. Gretchen
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
I think this fits the Lune format better.
I would recommend a slight edit in punctuation to:
serene night --
village rests in the arms
of the moon and stars
Mark
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Gypsy,
I think this fits the Lune format better.
I would recommend a slight edit in punctuation to:
serene night --
village rests in the arms
of the moon and stars
Mark
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
The satori is the last line, the one that has the zen concept that humans and nature are one.
Gypsy