Comment from
Y. M. Roger
An eery and almost consuming darkness created by your free verse here... although the line between emotion and thoughts is blurred, the reader is left with a sense of 'ominous'... good Halloween free verse! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
Comment from
papa55mike
That fear of the night can grow into a nightmare in the future. It can lead to hopelessness. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 25-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024