outer time,outer man
time display time5 total reviews
Comment from samandlancelot
Hi GodLucifer,
Your repetitions and repositioning of the different connections between man, space, and time suggest there are more connections between man and his universe than we might suspect. You speak of 'outer time' as if the time is different than inner time or the world's clock time.
I believe everything in the universe reflects the God who created man, the universe, and time.
Did you intend to use 'a outer' instead of the grammatically correct 'an outer'? I realize there is freedom in poetry and it might fit your unique style, so I just wanted to check.
Patricia
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Hi GodLucifer,
Your repetitions and repositioning of the different connections between man, space, and time suggest there are more connections between man and his universe than we might suspect. You speak of 'outer time' as if the time is different than inner time or the world's clock time.
I believe everything in the universe reflects the God who created man, the universe, and time.
Did you intend to use 'a outer' instead of the grammatically correct 'an outer'? I realize there is freedom in poetry and it might fit your unique style, so I just wanted to check.
Patricia
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
Comment from Lana Marie
Nice job, you got my brain spinning, like the orbits of outer space. I had to read it carefully to have it sink in. Thank you for a glimpse inside your mind.
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Nice job, you got my brain spinning, like the orbits of outer space. I had to read it carefully to have it sink in. Thank you for a glimpse inside your mind.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
Comment from Regina Elliott
I recited the lines in my head
as I read them, a very cleverly
penned poem. I hope your
Sunday is going well, and may
you have a creative start to
your week. All the best.
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I recited the lines in my head
as I read them, a very cleverly
penned poem. I hope your
Sunday is going well, and may
you have a creative start to
your week. All the best.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Another meandering of the intellect through points of focus from man to the universe through time that leashes them all... Thanx for sharing today! ;) :)
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Another meandering of the intellect through points of focus from man to the universe through time that leashes them all... Thanx for sharing today! ;) :)
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What a fascinating poem you've shared here. I love how you play with the concepts of display and focus. Your use of simple yet profound phrases seems to invite us to think about our place within the vastness of existence. It's thought provoking!
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What a fascinating poem you've shared here. I love how you play with the concepts of display and focus. Your use of simple yet profound phrases seems to invite us to think about our place within the vastness of existence. It's thought provoking!
Comment Written 04-Nov-2024