2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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7 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL! Yes... not only simple beauty here, but a wonderful chuckle as well -- love it! ;) Thanx so much for sharing your 'haiku pen' with us all, my lady! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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LOL! Yes... not only simple beauty here, but a wonderful chuckle as well -- love it! ;) Thanx so much for sharing your 'haiku pen' with us all, my lady! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 25-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Seagulls do strut and can be very grumpy when one chooses not so share food with them. One in Ocean City, a grumpy seagull chose to follow us around the beach until we shared with him. LOL I enjoyed reading this poem and it brought this memory back to me.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Seagulls do strut and can be very grumpy when one chooses not so share food with them. One in Ocean City, a grumpy seagull chose to follow us around the beach until we shared with him. LOL I enjoyed reading this poem and it brought this memory back to me.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Grumpy seagull. LoL
Thank you very much, Barbara 😊
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
LOL! nice satori twist!
a great modern haiku with cool imagery and smooth flow. . . nice!!
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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LOL! nice satori twist!
a great modern haiku with cool imagery and smooth flow. . . nice!!
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
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Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Neonewman
Ha! I didn't see that coming. For some reason, the artwork reminds me of the Jurrasic era. Cool! What an imaginative piece, Gypsy. Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Ha! I didn't see that coming. For some reason, the artwork reminds me of the Jurrasic era. Cool! What an imaginative piece, Gypsy. Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
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My pleasure, Gypsy.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A great tribute to the seagull, craftily inviting your reader to imagine your subject being a woman. The transition starts to occur in the third line perhaps. Well done. Debbie
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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A great tribute to the seagull, craftily inviting your reader to imagine your subject being a woman. The transition starts to occur in the third line perhaps. Well done. Debbie
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
Lol! You teased us with the top picture leading us to think of a bathing beauty at the beach. But it's a midnight-eyed, smooth-legged seagull who will steal your lunch!
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
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Lol! You teased us with the top picture leading us to think of a bathing beauty at the beach. But it's a midnight-eyed, smooth-legged seagull who will steal your lunch!
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
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Hehe. It's so silly. Thank you very much, Sis.
❤️ Marival
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I liked reading this modern haiku. This seagull is described with anthropomorphic terms, much like a pretty young woman on a beach. Nice presentation, too. The word 'midnight' could pertain to the seagull's eyes and the background as well.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
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I liked reading this modern haiku. This seagull is described with anthropomorphic terms, much like a pretty young woman on a beach. Nice presentation, too. The word 'midnight' could pertain to the seagull's eyes and the background as well.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy