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Comment from Bill Schott
This tanka, Sky and Sea, has the proper formatting and finds the ways that nature and a distant lover may find the means to communicate using the wind and water.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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This tanka, Sky and Sea, has the proper formatting and finds the ways that nature and a distant lover may find the means to communicate using the wind and water.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Laurie Holding
This is a beautiful tanka, and I thank you for posting! I'm glad you wrote about the rules and history of tanka itself, because many FS readers will not know the rules that bound you during this writing. Good luck to you!
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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This is a beautiful tanka, and I thank you for posting! I'm glad you wrote about the rules and history of tanka itself, because many FS readers will not know the rules that bound you during this writing. Good luck to you!
Comment Written 25-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Brenda Strauser
Your poems are always so beautifully written and the pictures are exquisite. I like how you used the words touch me. I enjoyed this well written poem.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Your poems are always so beautifully written and the pictures are exquisite. I like how you used the words touch me. I enjoyed this well written poem.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from bob cullen
The posted picture is simply superb. Almost perfection I thought. Then I read your poem, purely divine. The picture hadn't delivered justice at all. Your words flowed delightfully.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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The posted picture is simply superb. Almost perfection I thought. Then I read your poem, purely divine. The picture hadn't delivered justice at all. Your words flowed delightfully.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was very evocative. I liked how i could visualize either a body part for the touch or a location where the couple meets. It was romantic and could have been provocative yet you kept the sentiment pure. Gretchen
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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This was very evocative. I liked how i could visualize either a body part for the touch or a location where the couple meets. It was romantic and could have been provocative yet you kept the sentiment pure. Gretchen
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Your words cause imagines in my mind and the presentation just adds to this perfect experience. This poem is so romantic and filled with passion, yet extremely innocent. I loved it. Thank you.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Your words cause imagines in my mind and the presentation just adds to this perfect experience. This poem is so romantic and filled with passion, yet extremely innocent. I loved it. Thank you.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Neonewman
This is quite romantic, Gypsy. I love the footprints being taken by the Ebb tide. Beautiful sentiment. The artwork almost portrays the dancer as a butterfly.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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This is quite romantic, Gypsy. I love the footprints being taken by the Ebb tide. Beautiful sentiment. The artwork almost portrays the dancer as a butterfly.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
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My pleasure, Gypsy.
Comment from gansach
This is a beautiful Tanka poem with a lovely presentation. Your images are complementary to the words, so colorful and attractive, drawing the reader in. And your words are descriptive, magical, very sensory with great imagery. Beautiful job!
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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This is a beautiful Tanka poem with a lovely presentation. Your images are complementary to the words, so colorful and attractive, drawing the reader in. And your words are descriptive, magical, very sensory with great imagery. Beautiful job!
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Exquisite! This is beautifully imagined and presented! The verse flows with pleasing effect, its repetition in the first line reinforces the sensuality of the theme. A virtual six from me. Thank you Debbie
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Exquisite! This is beautifully imagined and presented! The verse flows with pleasing effect, its repetition in the first line reinforces the sensuality of the theme. A virtual six from me. Thank you Debbie
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Jacob1395
This is a really intense piece and I thought you wrote this really well. I could feel the desire coming through in your writing and I thought it was very immersive. An excellent piece, I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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This is a really intense piece and I thought you wrote this really well. I could feel the desire coming through in your writing and I thought it was very immersive. An excellent piece, I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy