The Poets Menagerie
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Broken Toes"A collection of poems
20 total reviews
Comment from EILEEN LAW
Incredible! Thank you for your writing. I enjoy reading your work over and over. You should be proud of the work you do. You continuously impress the reader. I also like the pictures you choose to add to each of your works.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Incredible! Thank you for your writing. I enjoy reading your work over and over. You should be proud of the work you do. You continuously impress the reader. I also like the pictures you choose to add to each of your works.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Thank you. That's very kind of you. Thank you so much for this fine rating too. I'm very happy yet.It resonates with you and then everybody seems to like it.Thank you again.I hope you have an amazing evening!
Comment from ESOSTINE
This is a beautifully penned nonet and very descriptive too. It properly captures how the artist pushes beyond boundaries of comfort to satisfy the audience. Well done, dear Lea. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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This is a beautifully penned nonet and very descriptive too. It properly captures how the artist pushes beyond boundaries of comfort to satisfy the audience. Well done, dear Lea. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much.I appreciate you stopping in for reading, offering your thoughts and you find rating too! I'm glad you enjoyed it.I hope that you and yours are having a great night.Thanks again!
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a beautiful Nonet poem. It flows nice from beginning to end. It also tells a complete story. The picture you chose compliments the poem nicely.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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This is a beautiful Nonet poem. It flows nice from beginning to end. It also tells a complete story. The picture you chose compliments the poem nicely.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Cecilia, for your kind review your time. Especially this great rating you offered. Thank you 2 for I'm stopping in. I hope you will again.I hope you have an awesome evening.Thank you
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Lea,
You're welcome
Cecilia
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are descriptive, interesting and creative. I like how
this author describes the pain of this Art! I also liked the format of
these words. I pondered on these words. The poem flows and connects
well. The artwork is awesome and goes well with these words.
Have a great Sunday! Maria
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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The author's words are descriptive, interesting and creative. I like how
this author describes the pain of this Art! I also liked the format of
these words. I pondered on these words. The poem flows and connects
well. The artwork is awesome and goes well with these words.
Have a great Sunday! Maria
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Maria. I appreciate your kind words.Thank you so much for stopping into read it.Offering your comments. I appreciate it very much, and for your fine rating too. I hope you have the best day!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really love the dreamy feel of your poem! It's like you captured the grace and struggle of a ballerina all in one. The emotions of being "bewildered" and "starving" really stuck with me. It's a powerful poem that really touched me. Keep it up!
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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I really love the dreamy feel of your poem! It's like you captured the grace and struggle of a ballerina all in one. The emotions of being "bewildered" and "starving" really stuck with me. It's a powerful poem that really touched me. Keep it up!
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Michael. I'm so happy you liked it. Thank you for reading too and offering you great comments and your fine rating. I appreciate your time and again.Thank you, and hope you have a great day!
Comment from Bill Schott
This nonet, Broken Toes, has the proper formatting and allows that the artist will go beyond his/her personal barriers to connect with the muse which demands perfection.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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This nonet, Broken Toes, has the proper formatting and allows that the artist will go beyond his/her personal barriers to connect with the muse which demands perfection.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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Hi Bill! Thank you so much for your review and for the great rating! Appreciate your time and thanks for the read. I hope you have an amazing day!
Comment from Nicki.B
Powerful poem written beautifully! I've seen movie black Swan which really gives a picture of how sixh a wonderful talent and art can be abused and its fascinating to see. Another industry craving for perfection
Well done and good luck!
Best Wishes
Nicki x
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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Powerful poem written beautifully! I've seen movie black Swan which really gives a picture of how sixh a wonderful talent and art can be abused and its fascinating to see. Another industry craving for perfection
Well done and good luck!
Best Wishes
Nicki x
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much for this awesome review.I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you for your time too, Nicki. Appreciate you.Having read and offering your kind thoughts.I hope you have a great day!
Comment from Nebuli
What a unique subject for a poem that you have so eloquently and beautifully portrayed. I am a big fan of the last two lines "starving/art" as I think these two lines most strongly depict what seems to be your message with this poem. Amazing!
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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What a unique subject for a poem that you have so eloquently and beautifully portrayed. I am a big fan of the last two lines "starving/art" as I think these two lines most strongly depict what seems to be your message with this poem. Amazing!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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Wow, thank you so much. For this awesome review and your great rating, for which I'm very grateful. I'm so glad you liked the poem. I have that.You like it festival, thank you for the six as well
Comment from Colorado Owl
Few people understand the pain that ballerinas endure. They torture their bodies in their attempt to defy gravity and physiology! Thank you for your poem that honors them.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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Few people understand the pain that ballerinas endure. They torture their bodies in their attempt to defy gravity and physiology! Thank you for your poem that honors them.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the poem and that you understand it as well as you do. I thank you so much for your kind reviewing for your time. I hope you have the best day!
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
An amazing image and overall presentation.
The words and image blend into one and seem to encapsulate the essence of a ballerina.
A great contest entry.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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An amazing image and overall presentation.
The words and image blend into one and seem to encapsulate the essence of a ballerina.
A great contest entry.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much, Shirley. That's so kind of you to say. Appreciate your words and your observations. I always like to hear constructive criticism, it's welcome as well. I'm opened here.Anybody's thoughts or ideas?And I thank you very much for yours have a great night!