His Silence
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Comment from BethShelby
I definitely think I be leaving this place is someone threatened punishment and was always watching me. Everything about this place would trigger warning bells for me.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2024
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I definitely think I be leaving this place is someone threatened punishment and was always watching me. Everything about this place would trigger warning bells for me.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Beth, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Wow, getting scary for poor Danielle/Grace. She goes out of her way to help Noah, but learns that's not going to help. All she has done is make things worse. And now, she's been threatened to be punished. I'm sure that's coming sooner or later. Oliver can only shield her for so long.
Take care,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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Wow, getting scary for poor Danielle/Grace. She goes out of her way to help Noah, but learns that's not going to help. All she has done is make things worse. And now, she's been threatened to be punished. I'm sure that's coming sooner or later. Oliver can only shield her for so long.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 22-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Rhonda, I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Begin Again
She hasn't actually said she was joining them forever, has she? And Mary acts like she is in charge and Danielle is a child. Do they believe that they are in charge of Danielle and Callum now and nothing else matters? I understand that as a cult they believe they are in charge, but Danielle still has her free will and should leave... Not too smart to allow people to control you like that, especially with locked doors.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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She hasn't actually said she was joining them forever, has she? And Mary acts like she is in charge and Danielle is a child. Do they believe that they are in charge of Danielle and Callum now and nothing else matters? I understand that as a cult they believe they are in charge, but Danielle still has her free will and should leave... Not too smart to allow people to control you like that, especially with locked doors.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 22-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Mary is certainly a scary person. She so firmly believes in all the rules, even if she knows Oliver wants to leave and eat out in a restaurant. Is Noah alive or a corpse in his bed?
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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Mary is certainly a scary person. She so firmly believes in all the rules, even if she knows Oliver wants to leave and eat out in a restaurant. Is Noah alive or a corpse in his bed?
Comment Written 22-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Okay, she survived Mary, but what will Oliver do? I am still worried about Danielle. I wonder if Callum heard her in the hallway. I guess we'll have to wait until the next post. Thank you for sharing this with us.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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Okay, she survived Mary, but what will Oliver do? I am still worried about Danielle. I wonder if Callum heard her in the hallway. I guess we'll have to wait until the next post. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Barbara, I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Kahlani
This is an intriguing story. I've only just started reading it but it has all the elements of a good story. Mystery, evil, and intrigue. I look forward to the next chapter.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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This is an intriguing story. I've only just started reading it but it has all the elements of a good story. Mystery, evil, and intrigue. I look forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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Thank you, I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
The normally assertive Danielle is lost for words. And I don't blame her. Mary is scary, a fact you've conveyed vividly here. But Danielle is taking risks now which are not in her best interest. She has to be less impulsive and plan her manoeuvres cautiously. Very well done, Jacob! Debbie
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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The normally assertive Danielle is lost for words. And I don't blame her. Mary is scary, a fact you've conveyed vividly here. But Danielle is taking risks now which are not in her best interest. She has to be less impulsive and plan her manoeuvres cautiously. Very well done, Jacob! Debbie
Comment Written 22-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Debbie. In my mind, Mary is more frightening than Oliver. I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
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Yes I can see that. She's so cold and fearsome. Well done on this. You're becoming my first post to review:)