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Merciful God

A poem of faith.

25 total reviews 
Comment from Neonewman
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This is a beautifully crafted piece you have entered for this My Faith contest. Only he can forgive our sins through Jesus Christ. I thank him every day.
God bless,
Steve

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
    Thank youi Steve for your kind review.
reply by Neonewman on 22-Oct-2024
    My pleasure.
Comment from karenina
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In a world where excuses or blaming others seems to be a circumventing of taking ownership of our sins, this poem of repentance is inspired by the light of our Lord!

Karenina

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
    Thank you Karenina for your thoughtful review. Don
reply by karenina on 22-Oct-2024
    You are welcome...
Comment from Boogienights
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This is a very heartfelt prayer to God, a promise to give your heart and soul to him. It's a beautiful expression of faith, one that will be heard by Him. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
    Thsank you so much BOOGIE.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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This is very dramatically illustrated and expressed. Your plea for forgiveness and redemption is impressively conveyed in your rhyming verse and will, I'm sure, be a strong contender in the contest. Well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
    Thank you so very much Debbie.
Comment from royowen
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I love the sheer humility of your post, I think this is the only way to approach the Lord to do it humble abeyance to His holy goodness and mercy, He can't abide the pride that seems to pour from mankind, with a sense of entitlement that humans have these days, beautifully written, great work D&V, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
    Thank you so very much Roy, you are very kind.
Comment from June Sargent
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When we feel we are mired in the quicksand of fear and doubt, we need to reach out to our loving Creator for help. He knows our weaknesses and can lift us out of whatever situation we're stuck in to be free again. We just need to believe that He is there.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
    You are very kind.
Comment from Jacob1395
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This is a very spiritual piece and I could feel your trust in God as I was reading it which really comes through in your writing as you ask for forgiveness. A Well written piece. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
    Thank you Jacob.
Comment from Nicki.B
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What a beautiful poem of faith, the perfect entry for the prompt, a prayer of forgiveness which we can all do with! Best of luck with the contest, well done
Best Wishes

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
    Thank you for your generous review.
Comment from bob cullen
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What a heartfelt prayer, and I'm sure that will attract an answer. Not necessarily the one you seek, but certainly one that will deliver some form of peace. Keep faith. And more importantly, keep believing.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
    Thank you so much Bob.
Comment from Barry Penfold
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Good entry to the Faith Poetry contest. Image spot on and thanks for sharing. Rhyming good and I wish you all the best in the contest. Take care and have a most wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
    Thank you Barry.