Comment from Tim Margetts

Excellent

How beautifully simple, pure and clean. This captures the essence of a moment, a feeling, a sensation of being in a single phrase.
And due to the constraints of the system requirements to review, my comments far outstretch your poetic simplicity.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2024

Comment from karenina

Excellent

I voted for this! I had no clue who wrote it, but how happy am I it was you? Very happy! That image with the leaves blowing is the cherry on top of the sundae!

You evoked the most emotion in this very limited 1-9-1 format. I'm often left empty with these super short forms.

You've made it a poem of substance!

Karenina

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024

Karen,

Wow! "You made it a poem of substance!" What a high compliment. I was working on a 3-5-3 poem about Autumn when the 1-9-1 contest prompt posted. I immediately switch as the verse I had written was better suited to this poem and matched perfectly with the title and the artwork selected to accompany the poem.

All the best,

Eugene

reply by karenina on 27-Oct-2024

Well that worked out perfectly! I enjoyed reading several of your posts today!

(Still hoping to see you in the "Of the month" nominations!)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Those quivering leaves soon fall off the tree like confetti and the magic of Autumn leaves us in awe of this season's ambient scenes, I enjoyed your few word, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2024

Comment from evilynne

Excellent

Lovely soft words describing fall breezes. The picture adds to the feeling. The words fit the requirements of the contest very well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest! Evi

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2024