Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi,
Nicely done senryu. It could be perfect for political pundits or others on news channels. They're words to create a sense of torpor.
I like the artwork.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great weekend eve.
Joan

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024

Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya

reply by dragonpoet on 18-Oct-2024

You are most kindly welcome, Zanya.
Joan
P S If I haven't told you yet, I have just published a book called "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

I'm going with torpor on this one... A fun take on the senryu format/form here -- your image is a great compliment to your poem! Certainly brings a smile to the reader's face! Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you in the contest! ;)

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024

Great review zanya

Comment from Cullen T. Bridges

Excellent

It seems that today there's no shortage of word salads, and frankly, I don't think I can stomach it. Creatively written and a good use of words. Good job!

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024

Great review Zanya

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This senryu, Word Salad, has the proper formatting and suggests that when we run out of intelligent things to say, it may be time to shut it up......

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024

Thanks for reviewing zanya