Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi,
This is a good metaphor about a bullies words and actions. They are really cowards. If you stand up to them they falter.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great rest of the week.
Joan

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024

Thank you, Joan. You too.

reply by dragonpoet on 17-Oct-2024

No problem.
Joan

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Good

A unique take on the senryu format/form here -- your image is a great compliment to your poem! I would suggest, perhaps, using fewer 'small' words such as 'the' and going for a more 'maximum' use of your syllables.... Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you in the contest! ;)

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024

Thanks.

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

What a powerful poem! I love how you share the difference between the coward's roar and the hero's bluster. I makes you think about what true courage looks like. The poem flows beautifully. It's a deep message. Great job!

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024

So very kind, Michael.

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

Good one! And the picture sets off your words perfectly! I'm not a poet so I can't comment on the rules, but it appears to match. I enjoyed it! Have a great day! And thank you for sharing.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024

Thank you, Carol.