Comment from
Dolly'sPoems
Long lasting love is like vintage wine, it improves with age and I enjoyed your fine words here as you describe the journey of love. This is a touching post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024
Comment from
Cullen T. Bridges
Let's talk about this line: "The fermented fragrance of romance enjoyed with every swallow." Keeping within the context of the first and final parts of the poem, I can't express how much I love the wordplay here. It's punchy in many ways, and the metaphor is wonderfully crafted. Well done all around!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024