Collection of a Lifetime
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "The Scarecrow"a collection of poetry and experience
16 total reviews
Comment from Samantha Wymer
That is awesome and fun poem about the life of a scarecrow, all of its true now that I really think about it. You truly have a rhythm pattern perfectly with this poem. Great job.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
That is awesome and fun poem about the life of a scarecrow, all of its true now that I really think about it. You truly have a rhythm pattern perfectly with this poem. Great job.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from jake cosmos aller
a nice tribute to the scarecrow who does his duty quietly keeping the birds away from the corn crops guarding his domain I would have written this as a tribute to the Scarecrow in the Oz novels and movie.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
a nice tribute to the scarecrow who does his duty quietly keeping the birds away from the corn crops guarding his domain I would have written this as a tribute to the Scarecrow in the Oz novels and movie.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed this poem. I like the way it is written. I'm learning more and more about poems. I joined Fanstory in December. I wrote short stories but not poems. All the colors you used give an autumn feel. Great job.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
I enjoyed this poem. I like the way it is written. I'm learning more and more about poems. I joined Fanstory in December. I wrote short stories but not poems. All the colors you used give an autumn feel. Great job.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This is an excellent poem for the poor, lonely scarecrow. Your rhythm and rhyme are well done. I can see a little child enjoying this verse, but I enjoyed it, too.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
This is an excellent poem for the poor, lonely scarecrow. Your rhythm and rhyme are well done. I can see a little child enjoying this verse, but I enjoyed it, too.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from bob cullen
How good is this. Factually written. Obviously by a farmer. They only consider reality; income and expense. Scarecrows require no feeding, GOOD. Conversely they just stand out in paddocks producing nothing. BAD. 50/50 Pretty much like your kids.
A solid write.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
How good is this. Factually written. Obviously by a farmer. They only consider reality; income and expense. Scarecrows require no feeding, GOOD. Conversely they just stand out in paddocks producing nothing. BAD. 50/50 Pretty much like your kids.
A solid write.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Thanks so much!
Comment from cupa tea
Poor scarecrow...Makes me think of the the wizard of oz. He found a home and a place out of the sun.
Your poem runs well is easy to follow and enjoyable. If you wrote it for a contest good luck!
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
Poor scarecrow...Makes me think of the the wizard of oz. He found a home and a place out of the sun.
Your poem runs well is easy to follow and enjoyable. If you wrote it for a contest good luck!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Begin Again
What a touching poem for Mr. Scarecrow...reminded me of the scarecrow in the Wizard of Oz... the poem reads licely and was enjoyable to read. Thank you for sharing.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
What a touching poem for Mr. Scarecrow...reminded me of the scarecrow in the Wizard of Oz... the poem reads licely and was enjoyable to read. Thank you for sharing.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Thanks so much, Carol!
Comment from ESOSTINE
Mr scarecrow has actually seen it all through the seasons and time. Your poem captured the lonely life of a scarecrow. Thanks for sharing your hilarious thoughts, dear Gansach. Have a lovely moment.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
Mr scarecrow has actually seen it all through the seasons and time. Your poem captured the lonely life of a scarecrow. Thanks for sharing your hilarious thoughts, dear Gansach. Have a lovely moment.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from royowen
Of course, one's mind seems to speed to the scare crow in the Wizard of Oz. Because that's what he was looking for was a heart, but he already had the metaphorical heart that we're looking for, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
Of course, one's mind seems to speed to the scare crow in the Wizard of Oz. Because that's what he was looking for was a heart, but he already had the metaphorical heart that we're looking for, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much!
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Bless you
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You made me smile with this post about your empathy for the scarecrow! I have noticed in France they have some amusing scarecrows. I once saw a giant spider in the field and I was terrified, but the birds also kept their distance. Your poem has a smooth flow and I enjoyed the humorous sentiments, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
You made me smile with this post about your empathy for the scarecrow! I have noticed in France they have some amusing scarecrows. I once saw a giant spider in the field and I was terrified, but the birds also kept their distance. Your poem has a smooth flow and I enjoyed the humorous sentiments, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Thanks so much~it was hard to find a sad scarecrow image, most were smiley or scary.