Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Interesting. Women don't usually make such bold moves, especially beautiful Asian women. But why not.

note:

As everyone was walking away from the group prayer share, her heard a "hey."

-As everyone was walking away from the group prayer share, he heard a, "Hey."

"Well, that's improvement, flattery and honesty. You have me on Linked-In, stay in touch? Ok?" She waved her hand right into his face. "Bye." Her smile stayed. She walked away.
-"Well, that's a nice thing to say. You have my number on Linked in. Call me. She waved. "Bye." She walked away, but her smile lingered in his mind.

I buy you lunch or dinner. Let me know."
- I'll buy you lunch or dinner. Let me know."

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2024

Thank youuuuuu! Yeah, this was inspired by a real person, who is not beautiful, slightly bulky, but has nice eyes and nice ambiance ;)

Comment from Nicki.B

Excellent

I really love this, the power of eye contact across the room and the awkward human feeling things that makes us all connected. And just that moment of instant attraction and the absolute delight to have a chat and exchange details.I wonder does this happen so much these days with the world of social media, it's sad.
Well done, great short story!
Best Wishes
Nicki

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2024

Thanks! Agreed....... People need to embrace awkward moments, be more bold, brave, forget feelings, forget pills, forget "anxiety" and break out of their shells. Life is too short.

reply by the author on 23-Oct-2024

Forget feelings - I mean, not be afraid to step on someone's toes if the feeling is NOT mutual, not be afraid to ruffle feathers, etc.