2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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9 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Eeewwww... creepy in a number of different ways here, my lady -- if death/horror were combined, this one works! Thanx so much for sharing the power of words to touch both bad and good.. :) Yvette
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Eeewwww... creepy in a number of different ways here, my lady -- if death/horror were combined, this one works! Thanx so much for sharing the power of words to touch both bad and good.. :) Yvette
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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LoL I love horror
Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from GWHARGIS
Ewwwww!!!! This gave me goosebumps! I loved it. How many nights does someone wake up to the feeling that someone is watching them. It's a creepy feeling. This was fully changed with spookiest. Gretchen
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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Ewwwww!!!! This gave me goosebumps! I loved it. How many nights does someone wake up to the feeling that someone is watching them. It's a creepy feeling. This was fully changed with spookiest. Gretchen
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words 😊 my fellow horror fan.
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. You did a wonderful job creeping me out. Dean would be proud and he's looking down smiling at this poem. I know it.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. You did a wonderful job creeping me out. Dean would be proud and he's looking down smiling at this poem. I know it.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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LoL yes, dean would like it.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Neonewman
Oh, hell! I wouldn't like to see that staring at me in the middle of the night. Well, I guess it could be worse, lol. I love this Horror or Death prompt. When I retire, I'll have all the time I need to write every day. Until then, I'm a slave to my job. I miss Dean; I enjoyed his work tremendously. I will have to look for this book on Amazon.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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Oh, hell! I wouldn't like to see that staring at me in the middle of the night. Well, I guess it could be worse, lol. I love this Horror or Death prompt. When I retire, I'll have all the time I need to write every day. Until then, I'm a slave to my job. I miss Dean; I enjoyed his work tremendously. I will have to look for this book on Amazon.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
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My pleasure, Gypsy.
Comment from shelley kaye
what a creepy smile she has lol
love the shadowed pic at the bottom!
a great horror haiku!!
cool imagery and smooth flow-
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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what a creepy smile she has lol
love the shadowed pic at the bottom!
a great horror haiku!!
cool imagery and smooth flow-
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Mark D. R.
Scary again Gypsy! I favor this genre by you!
Growing up, I did not fear the monsters under my bed. However, many children do have these fears.
Your poem will get a positive response from the adults in our FS community for sure.
Mark
P.S. BTW ...The image at the bottom can hardly be discerned on my iPhone review. The top one is very scary!
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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Scary again Gypsy! I favor this genre by you!
Growing up, I did not fear the monsters under my bed. However, many children do have these fears.
Your poem will get a positive response from the adults in our FS community for sure.
Mark
P.S. BTW ...The image at the bottom can hardly be discerned on my iPhone review. The top one is very scary!
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Do you like horror movies? They are my favorite genre. The bottom picture is supposed to be in the dark barely seen
Gypsy 😊
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Horror movies are more scary than the books, but is not my first choice for reading/viewing. OK on bottom image!
Comment from RJ Heritage
We all have what may be called, a sixth sense. The hair raising feeling when something is wrong.
Nicely presented Horror Haiku for the club. Thank you for sharing
RJ
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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We all have what may be called, a sixth sense. The hair raising feeling when something is wrong.
Nicely presented Horror Haiku for the club. Thank you for sharing
RJ
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from Julie Helms
I want you to TAKE THIS BACK! Gypsy, you have created a horror in such few words. I mean, real terror. IN MY FACE.
In other words, a fantastic job! You successfully conveyed an intense emotion succinctly.
Well done!
Julie
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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I want you to TAKE THIS BACK! Gypsy, you have created a horror in such few words. I mean, real terror. IN MY FACE.
In other words, a fantastic job! You successfully conveyed an intense emotion succinctly.
Well done!
Julie
Comment Written 14-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words 😊
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
That's pretty scary! I hope Atticus doesn't see this but maybe he would find it funny. Great use of alliteration of S-initial and D-initial words in this little poem!
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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That's pretty scary! I hope Atticus doesn't see this but maybe he would find it funny. Great use of alliteration of S-initial and D-initial words in this little poem!
Comment Written 14-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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Atticus loves scary monsters cartoons on YouTube but they are appropriate for his age. He loves Halloween stuff we don't let him watch adult horror movies. Fantasy movies like Harry potter, Beetle
juice, Disney too.
Thank you very much, big sister ❤️