In My Fart's Acclaim
A memory from sixth grade.5 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
LOL This happened to my grandson, a few years ago. In November he'll be 19. LOL I had fun reading. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. I'm so glad you're writing again.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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LOL This happened to my grandson, a few years ago. In November he'll be 19. LOL I had fun reading. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. I'm so glad you're writing again.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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And I bet you remind him constantly. Grandmothers can be such mischievous 'old dears' sometimes. Especially, when he's dating a new girlfriend. Loved this reply, I think it's a whole lot better than the poem. Then again, most comments are better than that.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Great, Bob! Loved all the character and humour here! You made it all seem so real:)) This is definitely contest-worthy. One of my favourite lines that produced a big smile for me: "Kind of melodious and it prompted a little hum.."
You're on fire at the moment after your little hiatus:)) Take care (with flatulence especially:)) Debbie
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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Great, Bob! Loved all the character and humour here! You made it all seem so real:)) This is definitely contest-worthy. One of my favourite lines that produced a big smile for me: "Kind of melodious and it prompted a little hum.."
You're on fire at the moment after your little hiatus:)) Take care (with flatulence especially:)) Debbie
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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In my case I must tell you, it's not either the sound or odour that gives me away, it's that cheeky smile on my face. Perhaps I should have used that line. Thank you for such a fantastic review. This is one I'll forever cherish.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Welcome to my demented world.
For the second time this day... anduiabgfiub ... I have to say but not in Punjai, this is hilarious and afforded me an even louder chuckle than did your comment on my release last night. Thanks.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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Welcome to my demented world.
For the second time this day... anduiabgfiub ... I have to say but not in Punjai, this is hilarious and afforded me an even louder chuckle than did your comment on my release last night. Thanks.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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What a priceless response. Seems we are probably on similar medications. Thank you again Tom. Hope you're on tablets and not needles. 'Cause if you're hear them say, 'little prick,' they are talking about the short, sharp jab, and not ME.
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You're welcomed!
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Just translated that. And U Ignorant Aussie, Bumbling Grub Flinging Inaudible Utter Bull (AndUIABGFIUB)
See, I too am fluent in pinjabi.
ignorant Aussie bumbling grub feathers in u bum
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
OMGosh, of all the times for me to finally get here to see my good friend, Bob, and find the most delightful and fun poem. Hahahahahhaha.
You had me laughing already at the title and it only got better from there.
You are so awesome and your poem just. has to be on the poem of the month list at the end of the month. So I am going to help, and give you a six star rating. Then I am going to spread the word to tell some others about this. This had me almost falling out of my chair laughing.
Thank you for the entertainment and the school girl giggles. Bob, you are the best!
Love, Debi
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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OMGosh, of all the times for me to finally get here to see my good friend, Bob, and find the most delightful and fun poem. Hahahahahhaha.
You had me laughing already at the title and it only got better from there.
You are so awesome and your poem just. has to be on the poem of the month list at the end of the month. So I am going to help, and give you a six star rating. Then I am going to spread the word to tell some others about this. This had me almost falling out of my chair laughing.
Thank you for the entertainment and the school girl giggles. Bob, you are the best!
Love, Debi
Comment Written 14-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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Apologies, my six year old just escaped and reappeared. He then wrote this poem and put my name to it. I see you too occasionally have childish relapses.
Comment from Julie Helms
Oh my gosh, I'm dying here--cannot stop laughing! That first stanza is CLASSIC!
And this line....the PRIDE!
I quietly sat so still relishing proudly in my fart's acclaim.
This is a very humorous, caught-me-by-surprise poem. Made my evening sunnier!
Julie
:-)
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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Oh my gosh, I'm dying here--cannot stop laughing! That first stanza is CLASSIC!
And this line....the PRIDE!
I quietly sat so still relishing proudly in my fart's acclaim.
This is a very humorous, caught-me-by-surprise poem. Made my evening sunnier!
Julie
:-)
Comment Written 14-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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So you too have a warped sense oh humour. Sorry if it offended. My childish side emerges every now and then.
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I wasn't even slightly offended....I was entertained! :-)
