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Comment from Tom Horonzy
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Well, what can one expect with only eight words to write. You did as well I suspect as everyone else.
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 Comment Written 14-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
    I didn't expect a reply in pinjabi. You should however check your spelling.
reply by Tom Horonzy on 15-Oct-2024
    You left me chuckling with your comment. Pinjabi? And here I did not know I did so. Have a great day!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Was the first line meant to say:

(Mom) or (Man). Not quite sure Bob, but I don't think you meant (Mon).

Not sure this poem was entered into the contest Bob, I would check it.

Love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
    Mon, was short for Monica. It was just a moment of senility. They are becoming more frequent.
reply by Dolly'sPoems on 15-Oct-2024
    Oh, I see Bob, I understand now x x x
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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It's a good entry, Bob, but are you sure it's been entered as there's only your note and not an endorsement from the committee. It may be worth checking with Tom? Good luck anyway! Debbie

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
    Perhaps they saw it as so poor they didn't comment. An appropriate response I would have thought.
reply by Debbie D'Arcy on 15-Oct-2024
    I don't think so, Bob. Perhaps you didn't press the right buttons to enter it. It's happened to me.