Willing Hearts
Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "Chapter 22 B"Solve a crime and fall in love at the same time?
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Comment from estory
In this chapter we see how Sami and Noah are handling the relationship and its effect on Noah's job, and also how that job is affecting their relationship. She seems still to be a bit uncomfortable with her position distracting him from his job, but he seems to be leaning into it in spite of the risks to his career. Love triumphs over all again. There is some suspense building about Chen's operation and it seems he has a complicated legal scheme in place to make it difficult for them. The dialogue was crisp and realistic as always. estory
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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In this chapter we see how Sami and Noah are handling the relationship and its effect on Noah's job, and also how that job is affecting their relationship. She seems still to be a bit uncomfortable with her position distracting him from his job, but he seems to be leaning into it in spite of the risks to his career. Love triumphs over all again. There is some suspense building about Chen's operation and it seems he has a complicated legal scheme in place to make it difficult for them. The dialogue was crisp and realistic as always. estory
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the insightful review. I appreciate it.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Well, he has said it now, and it's about time!! His team knew it before he did. I'm guessing we are just about at the end now; it's been a good story, Barbara. More young girls and boys are going home. That is good news. I am looking forward to what is going to happen next. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Well, he has said it now, and it's about time!! His team knew it before he did. I'm guessing we are just about at the end now; it's been a good story, Barbara. More young girls and boys are going home. That is good news. I am looking forward to what is going to happen next. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I did some math, and this story should be finished the first Sunday in February.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is definite cause for celebration with the fourth BDSM shop closed down and more boys and girls rescued. Now to find out if this trafficking ring is even more entrenched than they first thought. Could this be the closing stages of this artificial existence for Noah and Sami? Good pace driving this excellent story towards its possible conclusion. Thanks for sharing, Barbara. Debbie
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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This is definite cause for celebration with the fourth BDSM shop closed down and more boys and girls rescued. Now to find out if this trafficking ring is even more entrenched than they first thought. Could this be the closing stages of this artificial existence for Noah and Sami? Good pace driving this excellent story towards its possible conclusion. Thanks for sharing, Barbara. Debbie
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. We'll see what happens to Sami and Noah.
Comment from Begin Again
It's about time! Finally Noah and Sami might be on the same playing field and things are moving in the right direction. Great chapter, Barbara. Things are moving along.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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It's about time! Finally Noah and Sami might be on the same playing field and things are moving in the right direction. Great chapter, Barbara. Things are moving along.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.