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Sister

Love for my sister.

2 total reviews 
Comment from Sarah Probe S.
Excellent
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" Hold my hand, and walk this journey with me forever.
That is what our love is. "
This is a beautiful inspiring love poem written for your sister, it displays lots of feelings of special bonds and unconditional love,
Well done,
Blessings,
Sarah

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2024

Comment from Nicki Nance
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This is a lovely tribute that uses powerful metaphor, imagery, and alliteration. The message is poignant. You and your sister are well developed characters in an authentic story.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2024