Comment from
Sarah Probe S.
" Hold my hand, and walk this journey with me forever.
That is what our love is. "
This is a beautiful inspiring love poem written for your sister, it displays lots of feelings of special bonds and unconditional love,
Well done,
Blessings,
Sarah
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
Comment from
Nicki Nance
This is a lovely tribute that uses powerful metaphor, imagery, and alliteration. The message is poignant. You and your sister are well developed characters in an authentic story.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2024