Ariel
The spirit of the winds3 total reviews
Comment from Jewell Hermann
Vary nice, good rhyming, great word choice, I enjoyed learning about different winds from around the world.
Would not be surprised if this poem got in the top 3 for the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Vary nice, good rhyming, great word choice, I enjoyed learning about different winds from around the world.
Would not be surprised if this poem got in the top 3 for the contest.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Thank you.
Comment from F. William Lester
Very well done. I love the imagery and the naming of the different winds. Of course, twisters and hurricanes might be Ariel's fun, but they aren't to the rest of us. :) I liked your rhyming and beat, which you held throughout the poem. Nice work. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Very well done. I love the imagery and the naming of the different winds. Of course, twisters and hurricanes might be Ariel's fun, but they aren't to the rest of us. :) I liked your rhyming and beat, which you held throughout the poem. Nice work. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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So very generous. Many thanks.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from EeanBlack
I love it when people do the research. I'm excited about this poem. It made me feel. It made me think, and it made me look up Scirocco and Harmattan. God, I love it. " haec est optima!"
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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I love it when people do the research. I'm excited about this poem. It made me feel. It made me think, and it made me look up Scirocco and Harmattan. God, I love it. " haec est optima!"
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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So generous. Many thanks.