Comment from
Debbie D'Arcy
Such a poignant, heartfelt verse! I loved the way it started and drew me into the poem. Then it flowed with good rhyming and assonance, exploring those emotions ever deeper and ending on an upbeat, spiritual note. Well done, Lindsey! Debbie
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
Thanks so much for your feedback!
Comment from
Pearl Edwards
In any relationship it is hard sometimes not to take each other for granted. Now, when I look back I think of it as being confident that they are always there, they had our back and we theirs. Grief is a difficult road to travel, good luck and keep using your writing to help you.
Cheers
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
Thanks so much for your feedback!