Captured
Hunt for peace.5 total reviews
Comment from RodG
I am not a hunter, but would have the same reaction as the Speaker in this poem if I saw this deer. I'd lay down my gun.
You capture that powerful connection between man and Nature in this 5-7-5. Rod
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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I am not a hunter, but would have the same reaction as the Speaker in this poem if I saw this deer. I'd lay down my gun.
You capture that powerful connection between man and Nature in this 5-7-5. Rod
Comment Written 14-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Nicki Nance
The currency, simplicity and importance of your message comes through in this haiku. The graphic and formatting are perfect. Thank you for taking on a tough topic so beautifully.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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The currency, simplicity and importance of your message comes through in this haiku. The graphic and formatting are perfect. Thank you for taking on a tough topic so beautifully.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Such a wonderful offering for this contest -- although you had but seventeen syllables, you managed to make the reader think... :-) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! :-)
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Such a wonderful offering for this contest -- although you had but seventeen syllables, you managed to make the reader think... :-) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! :-)
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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I deeply appreciate your review.
Comment from ESOSTINE
This 5-7-5 writing prompt entry communicates the need for forgiveness and compassion when the opposite party shows a genuine remorse or weakness to take a fight. Well done, dear. It made an enjoyable read with a rich theme. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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This 5-7-5 writing prompt entry communicates the need for forgiveness and compassion when the opposite party shows a genuine remorse or weakness to take a fight. Well done, dear. It made an enjoyable read with a rich theme. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much.
Comment from patcelaw
A nicely written,575 for before the contest and A wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a wonderful day and may God bless your writing. Patricia.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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A nicely written,575 for before the contest and A wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a wonderful day and may God bless your writing. Patricia.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much.