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Tomorrow

A poem about a home coming

3 total reviews 
Comment from Begin Again
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Now that's got to be an uplifting poem regardless of anything else. I am so glad that Dad is out of the hospital and the family is happily back together. Blessings!
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
    Thank you
Comment from Sarah Probe S.
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I know that feeling, thanks for sharing in a 2-4-2 style poem I hope you win the contest, such poignant feelings, portrayed in just a few words of happiness,
Well done :)
Best wishes,
Sarah

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
    Thank you I appreciate your review, it felt good to write. I have been stress writing and posting it has helped, thank you
Comment from phoegon
Exceptional
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Wow, these are some tough constraints to adhere to. You had managed to capture emotion and so much in so few words. Great work. I'm taking note of your skill here on telling so much with so little.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
    Thank you