Comment from
Begin Again
Now that's got to be an uplifting poem regardless of anything else. I am so glad that Dad is out of the hospital and the family is happily back together. Blessings!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 14-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
Comment from
Sarah Probe S.
I know that feeling, thanks for sharing in a 2-4-2 style poem I hope you win the contest, such poignant feelings, portrayed in just a few words of happiness,
Well done :)
Best wishes,
Sarah
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
Thank you I appreciate your review, it felt good to write. I have been stress writing and posting it has helped, thank you
Comment from
phoegon
Wow, these are some tough constraints to adhere to. You had managed to capture emotion and so much in so few words. Great work. I'm taking note of your skill here on telling so much with so little.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024