Zen Fun.
Chick with attitude!3 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
An interesting and unique offering for this contest -- although you had but seventeen syllables, you brought a smile to the reader's face! :-) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! :-)
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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An interesting and unique offering for this contest -- although you had but seventeen syllables, you brought a smile to the reader's face! :-) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! :-)
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Thank you for feedback.
Comment from phoegon
I love the curveball at the end of the poem. I suggest using another word in place of share or tweaking that line. I feel like you are 98% there with this piece. You captured the attitude that you alluded to in the short description. I only gave it 4 instead of 5 since I do feel the "attitude could be ramped up a little bit more. :) I'd do 4.5 if possible.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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I love the curveball at the end of the poem. I suggest using another word in place of share or tweaking that line. I feel like you are 98% there with this piece. You captured the attitude that you alluded to in the short description. I only gave it 4 instead of 5 since I do feel the "attitude could be ramped up a little bit more. :) I'd do 4.5 if possible.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Thank you for feedback.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You made me smile with this uplifting post full of fun and smiles and our attitude goes a long way to making us happy within, I enjoyed the sentiments here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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You made me smile with this uplifting post full of fun and smiles and our attitude goes a long way to making us happy within, I enjoyed the sentiments here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Thank you for kind feedback.