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Watchmen of the Desert

A nature haiku

3 total reviews 
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Such a wonderful offering for this contest -- although you had but seventeen syllables, you brought a vision for the reader even without your pic! :-) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! :-)

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
    Thank you so much for your kind praise.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A beautiful sight to behold and your ambient words paint a fine picture of the desert scene here, a warm and vibrant view, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
    So pleased you enjoyed the scene I painted here, Dolly. Many thanks for sharing.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt. Great personification of the cactus, turning them into sentries of the desert. i would love to see the desert some day.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
    I am delighted you enjoyed my personification of the cactus, Marilyn. Many thanks for sharing my poem.