Comment from
Y. M. Roger
Such a wonderful offering for this contest -- although you had but seventeen syllables, you brought a vision for the reader even without your pic! :-) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! :-)
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
Thank you so much for your kind praise.
Comment from
Dolly'sPoems
A beautiful sight to behold and your ambient words paint a fine picture of the desert scene here, a warm and vibrant view, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 11-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
So pleased you enjoyed the scene I painted here, Dolly. Many thanks for sharing.
Comment from
Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt. Great personification of the cactus, turning them into sentries of the desert. i would love to see the desert some day.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
I am delighted you enjoyed my personification of the cactus, Marilyn. Many thanks for sharing my poem.