The Simple Wisdom of a Child
5-7-5 Poem4 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Ohhh, Mystery Contestant, are you EVER singing my song with this one!!! I LOVE this fact about children, and I love this perfect 5-7-5 you have penned. I haven't read all the entries yet, but I can't imagine any others topping it and winning my vote more! I hope to see you in the Winner's Circle!! Xoxoxo
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Ohhh, Mystery Contestant, are you EVER singing my song with this one!!! I LOVE this fact about children, and I love this perfect 5-7-5 you have penned. I haven't read all the entries yet, but I can't imagine any others topping it and winning my vote more! I hope to see you in the Winner's Circle!! Xoxoxo
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Thank you for your review. I appreciate your kind words and confidence.
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I'm like the FanStory umpire, John; I call 'em like I see 'em!! xxoxoxo
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Such a wonderful offering for this contest -- although you had but seventeen syllables, you brought a smile to the reader's face! :-) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! :-)
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Such a wonderful offering for this contest -- although you had but seventeen syllables, you brought a smile to the reader's face! :-) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! :-)
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thank you for your review. I appreciate your kind words and good luck wish.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, The Simple Wisdom of a Child, has the proper formatting and suggests that some of the biggest decisions are less complex than they may appear.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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This 5-7-5, The Simple Wisdom of a Child, has the proper formatting and suggests that some of the biggest decisions are less complex than they may appear.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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Well said. I appreciate your review and comments.
Comment from SimianSavant
The words themselves in your piece aren't much, but with the picture it's brilliant. Should be a strong contest contender. Please cite the image source though in your author notes.
Regards,
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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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The words themselves in your piece aren't much, but with the picture it's brilliant. Should be a strong contest contender. Please cite the image source though in your author notes.
Regards,
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Comment Written 11-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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I agree with you, Sir. Without the picture, the words are just words. The photo gives the words thoughtful meaning. I appreciate your review, especially the sixth star.