2024 Japanese Poetry
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Comment from Nicki.B
Oh this is brilliant, love what you did here! Blind date with the Grim Reaper Aaagh! Nice and creepy for the season that upon us! Well done beautiful imagery and presentation as always! A pleasure to read
Best Wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Oh this is brilliant, love what you did here! Blind date with the Grim Reaper Aaagh! Nice and creepy for the season that upon us! Well done beautiful imagery and presentation as always! A pleasure to read
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Nicki
Gypsy 😊
Comment from EeanBlack
Ooooooh! I date her, a hundred different times. Okay, I'm going to try this style and see what a horrific train wreck I can cause. It is close to Halloween, so the carnage won't even be noticed. I also liked the poem about the Heron. I just didn't know how to respond to that on.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Ooooooh! I date her, a hundred different times. Okay, I'm going to try this style and see what a horrific train wreck I can cause. It is close to Halloween, so the carnage won't even be noticed. I also liked the poem about the Heron. I just didn't know how to respond to that on.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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LoL
Thank you very much, Fean
Gypsy 😊
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Always.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This poem has a fun twist at the end. Although the artwork leads us to believe this blind date is more than just funny looking. You outdid yourself with this poem. Thank you for sharing it with us.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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This poem has a fun twist at the end. Although the artwork leads us to believe this blind date is more than just funny looking. You outdid yourself with this poem. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much,
I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy 😊
Comment from GWHARGIS
Gypsy, thos was dark humor at its best. I love the parental tone and the girl's response that could either be cynical or foreboding. Very fun poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Gypsy, thos was dark humor at its best. I love the parental tone and the girl's response that could either be cynical or foreboding. Very fun poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 11-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much,
I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy 😊
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
This poems shows how uncomfortable blind dates can be. It also shows the height of impoliteness and almost meanness on the girl's part.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy your weekend.
Joan
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Hi
This poems shows how uncomfortable blind dates can be. It also shows the height of impoliteness and almost meanness on the girl's part.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy your weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 11-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much,
I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy 😊
Comment from BethShelby
This Gogyohka is chilling. Your poems are always so wonderfully illustrated with such appropriate pictures. Death waits and the door and her he is certainly strange looking but no laughing matter. Still is one has to go there would worse ways than to leave laughing.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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This Gogyohka is chilling. Your poems are always so wonderfully illustrated with such appropriate pictures. Death waits and the door and her he is certainly strange looking but no laughing matter. Still is one has to go there would worse ways than to leave laughing.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much,
I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Douglas Goff
Ha! What a wonderfully talented play on words.
Only you could make the reader wonder if they should be laughing ..... or running? Ha!
Great piece.
D
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Ha! What a wonderfully talented play on words.
Only you could make the reader wonder if they should be laughing ..... or running? Ha!
Great piece.
D
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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I would say.... run! haha
Thank you very much,
I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
lol cute, creepy, and funny
great gogyohka poem
well-written with smooth flow
and cool imagery
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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lol cute, creepy, and funny
great gogyohka poem
well-written with smooth flow
and cool imagery
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much,
I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Bill Schott
This gogyohka, The Blind Date, has the proper formatting and leaves the readers to accept that the blind date is somewhat unexpected and will likely not get her home on time.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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This gogyohka, The Blind Date, has the proper formatting and leaves the readers to accept that the blind date is somewhat unexpected and will likely not get her home on time.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much,
I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Wendy G
Oh dear - and yet he may be the sweetest kindest man. Interesting that looks matter more. Yet your poem is humorous and fun, showing the values young people often think are important. Beautifully presented.
Wendy
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Oh dear - and yet he may be the sweetest kindest man. Interesting that looks matter more. Yet your poem is humorous and fun, showing the values young people often think are important. Beautifully presented.
Wendy
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much,
I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy 😊