Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

You describe our spiritual struggles well. And you're right - not only do the prayers of our fellow believers help us. Jesus prays for us, too. He will give us the victory!

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2024

Comment from jim vecchio

Excellent

There is much temptation out there. but there are those who remain steadfast and there are still praying people in this country (which was the theme of my latest story, "A Man And A Woman". No one need be oppressed.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024

thank you i shall read your work as soon as possible, and many thanks for sharing your suggestions and for your lovely review,
Kind regards,
Sarah

reply by jim vecchio on 11-Oct-2024

It's not my best work. Just mentioned it because of the theme.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a powerful poem Sarah and we sometimes want to escape our demons and we hope they don't follow us and our prayers save us from evil, although this is a free write there was a wonderful melody within, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024

Many thanks for your adorable review Dolly, your encouraging words of support mean the world to me, may God bless You, and take care ! ;)

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Your poem here is verywell written And I enjoyed listening to it very much. I wish you the very best with your writing. Also, wish you a wonderful day and I wish you the best in the contest and you have a lovely day. Patricia.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024

thank you so much :)