Love cannot take
A swap quatrain.29 total reviews
Comment from Nicki.B
What an excellent poem Roy, this poem technique is a tricky I think, and you've executed it perfectly.. a swap quantrain haven't seen one before I don't believe!
The words are beautiful, God sacrificed his life for us he loved us much. And in turn of we loved each other the way God lives us, there would never be fuss. Well done
Best Wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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What an excellent poem Roy, this poem technique is a tricky I think, and you've executed it perfectly.. a swap quantrain haven't seen one before I don't believe!
The words are beautiful, God sacrificed his life for us he loved us much. And in turn of we loved each other the way God lives us, there would never be fuss. Well done
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Thanks Nicki for these fantastic comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from l.raven
Hi Roy, your poem speaks so much truth
my sweet friend...
Love only gives, it should not take,
cause if it does that love is fake...
true love is unconditional...through thick
and thin...good times as well as the bad...
that is Jesus's love for us...unconditional...
and when people truly believe that...they
will feel a love like no other...I love your poem
sweet guy...and your picture says it all...
very well written...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Hi Roy, your poem speaks so much truth
my sweet friend...
Love only gives, it should not take,
cause if it does that love is fake...
true love is unconditional...through thick
and thin...good times as well as the bad...
that is Jesus's love for us...unconditional...
and when people truly believe that...they
will feel a love like no other...I love your poem
sweet guy...and your picture says it all...
very well written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Thanks so much Linda, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
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your always so welcome Roy...love xxoo
❤️🙏🌼
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Bless you Linda
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Bless you as well Roy...love xxoo
Comment from Becca M Myers
This is so True. Love just gives and gives. Our fathers love the truest and purest love and a free gift if one only accepts it. So beautiful and very nicely written. Thank you for Sharing
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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This is so True. Love just gives and gives. Our fathers love the truest and purest love and a free gift if one only accepts it. So beautiful and very nicely written. Thank you for Sharing
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Thanks Becca for these fantastic comments and a super review, blessings Roy
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You're welcome look forward to more
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Bless you, my elder child is Rebecca, but we call her Becca.
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Awe that's awesome I'm Rebecca but I go by Becca so cool
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Roy,
I think we seldom stop to think of the enormous cost that Jesus paid to purchase our salvation. It's almost too much to comprehend, and unfortunately we kind of gloss it over too often. Thanks for the reminder.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Hello Roy,
I think we seldom stop to think of the enormous cost that Jesus paid to purchase our salvation. It's almost too much to comprehend, and unfortunately we kind of gloss it over too often. Thanks for the reminder.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Thanks so much Tom, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from jake cosmos aller
interesting meditation on love from a Christian point of view. Reminds me a famous line from Mick Jager of the Rolling Stones. He said,
"money can't buy love, but money can rent a lot of love.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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interesting meditation on love from a Christian point of view. Reminds me a famous line from Mick Jager of the Rolling Stones. He said,
"money can't buy love, but money can rent a lot of love.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Thanks Jake, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from ESOSTINE
I love the flow and feel of the Swap Quatrain, and the theme of the poem exceptional. True love is attaches no conditions, yet there is a cost it carries, sacrifice. Thanks for sharing your lovely poem. Best of the day.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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I love the flow and feel of the Swap Quatrain, and the theme of the poem exceptional. True love is attaches no conditions, yet there is a cost it carries, sacrifice. Thanks for sharing your lovely poem. Best of the day.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Thanks so much for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Sarah Probe S.
thanks a million for your biblical inspired poem to remind us how much Jesus sacrificed for us and that his undeserved kindness reflects his endless love for us, your poem was very spiritual and captivating,
thanks a million for your lovely verses of love,
Good bless You
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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thanks a million for your biblical inspired poem to remind us how much Jesus sacrificed for us and that his undeserved kindness reflects his endless love for us, your poem was very spiritual and captivating,
thanks a million for your lovely verses of love,
Good bless You
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thanks so much Sarah, for these wise comments and a wonderful review, blessings Roy
Comment from lyenochka
God's love only gives and His love is perfect. The price of love to redeem mankind is one that only the Lord God could afford to pay. Well said in your swap quatrain poem!
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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God's love only gives and His love is perfect. The price of love to redeem mankind is one that only the Lord God could afford to pay. Well said in your swap quatrain poem!
Comment Written 11-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thanks Helen, for these kind comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from judiverse
Great job with the swap quatrains. The lines read perfectly either way. Good question--how much to spend to purchase love. You state there is a cost to love--Christ shed his blood for our sins. Eternal love must be pure, and should give and not take are part of your description of love. Very thoughtful wording and your rhyme and flow are masterful, as usual. judi
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Great job with the swap quatrains. The lines read perfectly either way. Good question--how much to spend to purchase love. You state there is a cost to love--Christ shed his blood for our sins. Eternal love must be pure, and should give and not take are part of your description of love. Very thoughtful wording and your rhyme and flow are masterful, as usual. judi
Comment Written 11-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thanks so much Judi, for these wise comments and a wonderful review, blessings Roy
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You are welcome. This was beautifully expressed. judi
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Roy,
A lovely swap quatrain. Your whole poem is awesome, but the last line is especially wise. I think of all the people I love, my family, friends, and know that love is real.
Fantastic poem, Roy.
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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Roy,
A lovely swap quatrain. Your whole poem is awesome, but the last line is especially wise. I think of all the people I love, my family, friends, and know that love is real.
Fantastic poem, Roy.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 11-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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Thanks Cindy, for these brilliant comments and review, blessings Roy