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Comment from BermyBye50
Gypsy,
Congrats on winning the 5-7-5 Poetry Contest. Your poem is exceptional. it captures the majesty and grace of the wonder and beauty of a White Heron.
I purchased a copy of your book Gypsy's Haiku [ Kindle Edition]
All the best,
Eugene
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2025
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Gypsy,
Congrats on winning the 5-7-5 Poetry Contest. Your poem is exceptional. it captures the majesty and grace of the wonder and beauty of a White Heron.
I purchased a copy of your book Gypsy's Haiku [ Kindle Edition]
All the best,
Eugene
Comment Written 03-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much 😊 I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi MariVal.
What a wonderfully written haiku. The first two lines describe the artwork perfectly. The final line can be taken literally or spiritually which makes in a good satori.
Congrats on winning the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a wonderful day
Joan
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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Hi MariVal.
What a wonderfully written haiku. The first two lines describe the artwork perfectly. The final line can be taken literally or spiritually which makes in a good satori.
Congrats on winning the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a wonderful day
Joan
Comment Written 02-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
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Don't mention it, MariVal. It was well deserved.
Joan
Comment from L. Kalere
I loved everything about this 5-7-5. The tranquility of the bird and the lagoon are subtly emphasized by the repetition of the "w" sound. You are hard to beat!
Linda
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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I loved everything about this 5-7-5. The tranquility of the bird and the lagoon are subtly emphasized by the repetition of the "w" sound. You are hard to beat!
Linda
Comment Written 02-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2025
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 A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry. |
Comment Written 02-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much 😊 I appreciate your outstanding seven stars!
Gypsy
Gypsy
Comment from Nicki.B
Oh this is stunning! I love it all. The beauty of the Heron and meaning behind them. Gorgeous imagery and presentation. A great runner for the 5-7-5 contest, good luck!
Best Wishes
Nicki
P.S how do you add a 2nd imaged to your poem at the end do you just copy and paste I've never tried it!
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Oh this is stunning! I love it all. The beauty of the Heron and meaning behind them. Gorgeous imagery and presentation. A great runner for the 5-7-5 contest, good luck!
Best Wishes
Nicki
P.S how do you add a 2nd imaged to your poem at the end do you just copy and paste I've never tried it!
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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no, my presentations are all my work and it is not a copy and paste, I use two different programs. It takes a long time but I enjoy it.
Thank you very much, Nicki
Gypsy 😊
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Awe they're amazing the hard works pays off x
Comment from BethShelby
This is a beautiful 5-7-5 poem. There is something about white heron that excites me. They are such exotic creatures. Against the black background they are amazing. You last line has a duel meaning.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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This is a beautiful 5-7-5 poem. There is something about white heron that excites me. They are such exotic creatures. Against the black background they are amazing. You last line has a duel meaning.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Beth. Happy Weekend!
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A lovely picture and these birds are magical and spiritual as they sit at the water's edge and watch with their keenly sharpened eyes, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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A lovely picture and these birds are magical and spiritual as they sit at the water's edge and watch with their keenly sharpened eyes, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 11-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Dolly. Happy Weekend!
Gypsy 😊
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You too x x x
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry contest. The White Heron is really one of the most graceful, beautiful birds. We had one who stayed near our backyard pond in Florida. Your poem does it justice. I love the final line. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry contest. The White Heron is really one of the most graceful, beautiful birds. We had one who stayed near our backyard pond in Florida. Your poem does it justice. I love the final line. Nicely done.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much,
I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend!
hugs 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
ooh cool satori of deep reflection
nicely, graceful haiku
with smooth flow wading through...
and cool pics
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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ooh cool satori of deep reflection
nicely, graceful haiku
with smooth flow wading through...
and cool pics
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading, as I do all of your poetry. The visualization you made possible with this poem is perfect. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading, as I do all of your poetry. The visualization you made possible with this poem is perfect. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy 😊
