Love Hurts...
A true tale of survival.2 total reviews
Comment from Kahlani
Poems based on real life sometimes convey the most profound emotions, such as this one. I can feel your pain and sadness and the hope that your wife will return. Poetry is an excellent release for these heavy emotions. Well done, and I wish you all the best.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Poems based on real life sometimes convey the most profound emotions, such as this one. I can feel your pain and sadness and the hope that your wife will return. Poetry is an excellent release for these heavy emotions. Well done, and I wish you all the best.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thanks for feedback.
Comment from Scott Burkhalter
Excellent start. As a married man of over 15 years, that first line was gripping. Then it moved from the rip of the heart to the chaos of a broken man trying to find the pieces of his heart. This made me sad and then happy to be in a happy marriage of my own.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Excellent start. As a married man of over 15 years, that first line was gripping. Then it moved from the rip of the heart to the chaos of a broken man trying to find the pieces of his heart. This made me sad and then happy to be in a happy marriage of my own.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thanks for feedback.